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Wow, intense!

PoorRuby, I know she was an idiot but she didn't push him in!

I'm glad Charlie sees that it was an accident and stood up for her. Angelo is making ultimatums just to show his anger, not cool.

Go Morag! I hope she finds Xavier's murderer, if anyone can, it's Morag :)

Great update, can't wait for s'more ;)

- Sam!

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Wow...I actually thought your writing couldn't get any better. What a finish to the chapter!! I can't believe Angelo gave Charlie an ultimatum. I know she won't want to choose but if she lets him walk out the door she's choosing Ruby. :unsure: I didn't see this coming! Stupid stupid Ruby, if anyone has to go it should really be her. Angelo was right to throw Jay out, cos if he hadn't have come to the house none of this would have happened. I mean what if Ben had walked in on them?? But I wish Angelo didn't give Charlie an ultimatum, cos otherwise maybe they could have sorted it all out, I mean Charlie is pregnant and this is the last thing she needs! I'm so glad wee Ben is ok, and I'm sure he'll want his mummy and daddy living in the same house! Glad Morag is making some progress with the investigation. Update soon!

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Wow this is really good! :o Great stuff you had written, Danni :)

Can't believe Angelo suggest Ruby should leave the house! <_< But glad Charlie stood up for her. :)

I hope Changelo will forgive Ruby soon. I blame Jay for this because he should never have turned up.

Update soon please xx

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I can't wait to find out what Morag found out from Neil. Maybe they'll finally catch the guy who is responsible for Xavier's death.

I'm so glad Ben will be alright. :)

I know Ruby seriously messed up but kicking her out of the house is really harsh too. That's a very hard choice to make for Charlie. How is she supposed to choose between her daughter and her husband? :unsure:

More please.

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Wow danni!

that was amazing! i can see why little benny doesn't want togo swimming, bless him. i am so glad he is alright and that there hasnt seemed to be much wrong with him. he's still so cut though! :)

Ruby's letter :( that was so hearbreaking! having put a brave face on, i feel so sorry for her! i hope angelo does fond her and brings her back; she needs her family -especially her mum- around her.

:wub: Ava getting Angelo and Charlie to pinky promise they wouldn't leave awww. Poor Charlie: not exactly what she needs, another child to look after and the worry of finding Ruby, especially when she's still recoverong from her near do!

Amazing update as usual Danni. can't wait for the next one xx

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Aww Ruby's letter was so sad :(

I hope Angelo finds her, although I get that he was mad, the ultimatum was just wrong <_<

But at least he's helping now. I'm glad Charlie now knows what Ruby is really feeling, I thinkshe needs he mum more than anything right now.

Amazing Danni,

- Sam!

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Gosh this is such a sad and beautiful chapter you had written, Danni.

Aww Ruby's letter is so sad :(

Glad Angelo decides to find her and bring her home

Awww loved Ava's pinky finger promise to her parents :wub:

Good thing that Charlie knew how her daughter is feeling now

Update soon xxxx

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I loved that chapter! :D

Ruby's letter was so sad. I feel so sorry for her. :( I hope Angelo finds her and brings her home.

Aww, Ava was so cute getting Charlie and Angelo to make a pinky promise. :wub:

Looking forward to the next chapter. :D

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Oh my goodness that was amazing!! It was soo beautiful and the emotions were perfect. I love how Ava got them to make up, and she made them see that the way they were acting was silly and wasn't getting them anywhere. I'm glad Angelo is going to bring Ruby back, Callum needs his mum and she won't last long without him either, he's her little piece of Xavier. I hope they find her soon, the letter was so sad, hopefully in time Ruby will be able to forgive herself for the Ben thing, and forgive herself for having feelings for someone who isn't Xavier. I'm glad the fighting didn't last long and I hope that soon they can be a happy family again, this pregnancy has been so rocky with so much drama! Great update as usual, it was very special.

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Danni, stop doubting yourself. That was a great Chapter.

I feel so sorry for Charlie, I just want to give her the biggest hug ever!, stressing about Ruby is the last thing she needs, and she needs to take care of herself: Falling asleep on the couch is a pretty big sign.

I can see why Angelo is a bit apprehensive about looking for Ruby; she did say she needed space and chance to think things through, but on the other hand, Charlie is right: Ruby needs her mother now more than ever, especially if she's feeling the way she is.

Ava, bless her hiding under the bed because she can't go to the movies.

And Ben, looking for a dummy to shut Callum up! :lol: BUt its not Cal's fault, he wants his mum.

I really hope Charlie's hunch about the tree house turns true, Charlie is despearte to talk to Ruby and help her.

And I'm glad Morag is making progress in the case against the person who killed Xavier.

Can't wait for the next chapter Danni. You never fail to impress :)

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