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Oh my God. Ellen, I actually feel physiclly sick & my heart is pounding in my chest. Jesus, Ellen. You need to update soon.

I don't even wanna know what's wrong with Jackson or anything but I'm pretty sure Sean is involved.

If he's hurt Belle, Jackson or Fliss, oh my, Aden is gonna kill him.

On the other hand, protective was just so cute & sweet & so hot.

I need one in my life. Where is he?

Another great update Ellen. Seriously amazing. Well done.

I look forwad to more - please update soon because you're leaving us in suspense here.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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Oh Ellen.

Poor Belle! & Flissy!

I hope they find Fliss soon.

& poor Belle. I hope she'll be okay too.

You've left me practically speechless with that chapter.

It was fantastic. Aden was written perfectly as per usual, protective, worried, everything.

I loved that chapter. It was just amazing but please make everything & everyone okay.

I look forward to more. You can't leave it too long because we need to know what's going to happen.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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Oh my gosh, Ellen!

Loved Aden in that chapter as per usual. I can imagine him finding it difficult to listen to Jackson's side of the story.

Knowing that Belle went through that & Jackson was there at the time. & Flissy, they had better find her soon.

That was brilliantly written & I hope Belle wakes up soon - to protective Aden of course.

Charlie was great with Jackson in that chapter.

So caring & understanding.

I loved everyone's emotions; Aden's, Justin's, Roman's, Charlie's, Jackson's. It was just wow.

Amazing work as per usual Ellen. Well done.

I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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Aww, poor Belle. & poor Aden.

Even though Roman & Jackson were mentioned very little in this chapter, you could still sense them there.

Roman trying to keep Belle calm & be supportive for her & Aden & Jackson. & Jackson being scared & upset.

I thought it was yet again, another fantastic chapter Ellen.

I loved the emotions & everything.

I just hope Flissy is safe & well & is found okay.

Well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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