Georgia Posted October 27, 2009 Report Posted October 27, 2009 Brill chapter. Loved the way that you did it as a flashback instead of in the moment. It was a really nice touch. Update again soon, I'm loving this Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Posted October 27, 2009 Oh, I was expecting Belle to be the one with the biggest regrets the next morning, not Geoff.Nice touch. Shame on him for doing a runner though.Does Belle actually remember what happened?Be interesting if she doesn't... Quote
HeavenForbid Posted October 27, 2009 Report Posted October 27, 2009 ^ ^ I was just thinking if she remembered or not. That would be good if she didn't. Great update. Quote
tessalove Posted October 27, 2009 Report Posted October 27, 2009 Oops! I think they made a big mistake! Poor Geoff, I wish Nic would wise up!! And Belle, I hope she gets herself back together!! Update soon! El x Quote
rocknroll Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Posted October 27, 2009 great update. i think they've made a mistake! ohh.. what's happened to nic!? update soon xx Quote
Barbara Posted October 27, 2009 Report Posted October 27, 2009 I can't wait to see how Geoff and Belle are going to react next time they see each other. I wonder if Nicole slept with Liam as well. More please. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Posted October 28, 2009 oops, they made a big mistake, looking forward to seeing how Geoff and Belle react the next time they see each other & I wonder what has happened to Nicole, great update Bec More please xoxo Quote
Georgia Posted October 29, 2009 Report Posted October 29, 2009 Gosh Geoff, make the conversation awkward much Quote “I... its just... was I good?’ Geoff asked as Belle’s eyes widened and she raised one eye brow. That was my favourite part, it makes me laugh every time I read it Was he good... ? Update again soon Bec. LY, Gee xox. Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 29, 2009 Report Posted October 29, 2009 Yes I wonder if Geoff was any good too (jokes). That chapter was very insightful to the characters feelings. Update soon! Quote
rocknroll Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Posted October 29, 2009 Geoff = awkward convos! oh were is nicole?! loved Belle and Aden's fight and Irene! update soon xx Quote
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