rocknroll Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 great start! i loved the way belle is drunk - you can see whats going to happen! update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Yay, you've started it!Good beginning, Belle putting Geoff's hand on her breast and his reaction was comedy gold.Really looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 hahahhahahaa!!!! Belle letting touch her breast, omg so funny! Loved it so far!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Yay ! It's posted I loved it, but you already knew that The bit with Belle placing Geoff's hand on her chest was a highlight for me. Update again soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Good start to the fiction Bec, I like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 That was so good! Really brill start!! Update soon! El xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Lol, drunk Belle I was waiting for this to start, brilliant first chapter Can't wait to see where it goes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 So, this is my first fic that I have written that is not about Aden/Belle... and is something different I am trying. this is dedicated to Georgia, Steph, El and RR1 That's not entirely true. I've read at least one non Adelle fic written by you and am still patiently waiting for an update for another one. *hint hint* The trailer looks really good and the fic sounds really promising. Belle is a funny drunk. I was wondering why she kept her bottle in her room but then I remembered she probably keeps it there so Irene doesn't feel tempted. I can't believe Nicole cheated on Geoff just like that. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Oooh, interesting idea. Can't wait to read more. Love it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 You really should lock the booze away from Belle... it doesn't do her any justice Loved the chapter.... and I really want to know what's wrong with Aden Update again soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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