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Martha has had it really hard; bless her :( I hate that Paul <_<

Jack is the best listener, ever :wub: But, I hope she tells Soph. It will help her to understand Martha better and maybe her anger will subside.

Excellent chapter; can't wait to read more!

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here are some spoilers for th enext chapter which will be up tomorrow :

After that talk, I felt better…it was weird feeling…like I was whole again. I truly believed at that moment that I could start my life again on a clean slate. That I could somehow finally forget my past and move on with my life. I was wrong…

The next morning I woke to the sound of shouting voices.

“Jack…” I began.

“Yea,” he said, looking out to sea.

“Yesterday, I wasn’t being completely honest with you…”

Also what do you guys think of Brianna who was mentioned in Martha's diary entry...was she no one or someone important?

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Also what do you guys think of Brianna who was mentioned in Martha's diary entry...was she no one or someone important?

If Martha does know her from somewhere, then i'd say she is of some significance, and you could bring her in.

And Martha wasnt completely honest? oh gosh, what more could there be?? <_<

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here are some spoilers for th enext chapter which will be up tomorrow :

After that talk, I felt better…it was weird feeling…like I was whole again. I truly believed at that moment that I could start my life again on a clean slate. That I could somehow finally forget my past and move on with my life. I was wrong…

The next morning I woke to the sound of shouting voices.

“Jack…” I began.

“Yea,” he said, looking out to sea.

“Yesterday, I wasn’t being completely honest with you…”

Also what do you guys think of Brianna who was mentioned in Martha's diary entry...was she no one or someone important?

Great chapter Kacie :)

Martha really has had it bad, poor girl :( *bug hug for Martha*

The spoilers are interesting, I dont like the way it said 'I was wrong' though, cause it sounded all positive but now .... :(

Anyhoo, looking forward to more :)

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