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What?!Was not expecting that ending at all...Oddly that actually makes me like Jed more, that he's not some flash...so-and-so and is willing to take a low paid job to make ends meet, even if he is keeping it from Belle.But does this mean Aden and Belle have been living near each other all the time and haven't noticed?

Loved Aden's thoughts while he was packing, they rang completely true.Liked the phone conversation with Nicole as well, even if she did seem a bit too jokey for the situation...Looking forward to seeing where you take this.

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loved it poor belle. OMG JED don't hurt Aden,

He wanted to meet this Aden Jefferies again, and make him pay for his mistake... the mistake that was made over four years ago, but was just now resurfacing to ruin Jed’s life.

Did you mean Aden not Jed? coz that didn't make sense.

Can't wait for an update. xx

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loved it poor belle. OMG JED don't hurt Aden,

He wanted to meet this Aden Jefferies again, and make him pay for his mistake... the mistake that was made over four years ago, but was just now resurfacing to ruin Jed’s life.

Did you mean Aden not Jed? coz that didn't make sense.

Can't wait for an update. xx

Nope, it's meant to say Jed...

Jed wants to meet Aden again, so that Aden can pay for his mistake (hurting Belle)... this happened over four years ago, but it's resurfacing now and ruining Jed's happiness with Belle.

Hope that helps :D

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loved it poor belle. OMG JED don't hurt Aden,

He wanted to meet this Aden Jefferies again, and make him pay for his mistake... the mistake that was made over four years ago, but was just now resurfacing to ruin Jed’s life.

Did you mean Aden not Jed? coz that didn't make sense.

Can't wait for an update. xx

Nope, it's meant to say Jed...

Jed wants to meet Aden again, so that Aden can pay for his mistake (hurting Belle)... this happened over four years ago, but it's resurfacing now and ruining Jed's happiness with Belle.

Hope that helps :D

Thanks yeap I got it, bit slow lol. x

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A really great update! I'm glad that Belle told Jed - he seems to be a good man...but then again, he wants to make Aden pay for his mistake - that's the part that I'm concerned about. :ph34r:

Loved the scene between Belle and Jed - emotional and also a nice flashback to what happened between Belle and Aden.

Can't wait for the next update! :D

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