Red Ranger 1 Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 It's a shame Jed's abandoned Belle like that, he did seem to care about her.Her reaction to Aden was very well done, it's understandable that even after what's happened and the fact they've bonded again to an extent she hasn't forgotten what he did to her.Ironically, though, he's probably all she's got right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scotcaz22 Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 wow! My eyes are watering up - oh poor Belle. Really, you've done it so well. Loved the conversation between Aden and Belle. I understand what Jed's going through, really, but to 'dump' Belle while she's going through everything - well, that's just wrong. Still, Belle've got Aden, and hopefully Nicole & Ben eventually. Ohh, I truly understand how Belle;s feeling when they kissed and suddenly Belle remembered what happened in the past - you timed it really well. Hopefully, Belle will be okay and that both of them can work it out eventually. Looking forward to the next update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Aww Poor Belle! I feel so sorry for her! Nothing is going well Great chapter! loads of emotion!! Epdate soon! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 WOW I liked that aden and belle were cute until the end. cant wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack... did you miss me? well of course you did Loved it... Jed is going to regret that one.... but what I loved the most is the kiss between Belle and Aden. It was so realistic but the way Belle pulled back and reacted was even better well done Gee... update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bubbleburst Posted January 7, 2010 Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 update soon? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Aww, I missed a couple of chapters...but caught up now! Poor Belle. And Aden...Will she ever be able to trust him again?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 (edited) Utterly brilliant chapter.I loved the conversation between Belle and Aden, it felt very realistic, that Belle still isn't completely over what happened to her and perhaps never will be and that she can't just fall back into a relationship with Aden even though she's more comfortable around him now.I liked the conversation with Jed too and the fact he hasn't been completely forgotten about.Not sure if Nicole was being discreet when she said she heard someone crying next door or if she really didn't realise it was Belle. That cliffhanger's left me really worried, I hope someone finds Belle soon as well. Edited January 12, 2010 by Red Ranger 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TelephotoMarigold Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 OMG! WOW! That was so good. Can't wait for more!! Tele xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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