~Zoe~ Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Yeah, you posted the new fiction A great start Danni Looking forward to your next update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 That was a really good start!! I love the way you put this storyline sooner! If that makes sense! Continue soon! El xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twinkletoesjess Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 A great start to your new fic. When I read that this was going to be another Charlie, Ruby, Angelo fic I assumed they would be together like in your first fic but i was wrong. I do like the way you incorporated the Charlie/Ruby storyling with Angelos return though, Its a good idea. Im looking forward to seeing where you take this fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Yah another fanfiction from you, Danni Update soon please. Can't wait to read more of this fanfiction Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Ooh, great start. I love the time frame in this story... it makes a lot of sense Update again soon... I want to know what happens. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eruanna Eire Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Ohh excellent!!!! Can't wait to read more, im curious as to who is behind her (fingers crossed for Angelo lol) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbi615 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Yay Danni's posted another Changelo fic! Great start, I loved the way you've combined the Charlie & Ruby storyline with the one of Angelo coming back. I'm sure deep down inside Charlie still loves Angelo! I wonder who's standing behind her... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Good update, I liked the tension between Charlie and Ruby and her conflicted feelings towards Angelo. Wondering who that is she went to see at the end... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twinkletoesjess Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Another great update, you write these characters so well. I love the way Charlie let Angelo in a little bit by allowing him to comfort her. I also love that Ruby has turned to Nicole for help in this as they did have a close friendship in the show not too long ago which now seems to have been forgotten about. I really hope the house belongs to who I think it does. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Good update I like the way Charlie let Angelo in a little bit to allow him to comfort her, hope that Ruby will talk to Charlie, she needs to explain things to her. & I like the friendship with Nicole and Ruby in this too, just like it was in the show a few months ago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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