Liska Posted June 20, 2007 Report Posted June 20, 2007 Belle and Maddie?! Didn't see that coming.. But I like this fic so far. Great work! Quote
belgshep Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 What a GREAT start to a fascinating new fic!!!! The mystery kidnapping has me intrigued and I can’t wait to find out more. Knowing how much you love Kimmy, my fave line has got to be Belle cuts in, “If you say Kimmy, I might have to kill you” That was just soooooo funny!! Quote
JosieTash Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 many many thanks for comments Due to time restrictions, i should only be able to do about 1 chapter a week .... but i hope to post Chapter 2 this weekend !!! Quote
Traceve Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 (edited) This is great JT The pairing of Belle & Mattie is interesting but quite good. Edited June 21, 2007 by Traceve Quote
Traceve Posted June 24, 2007 Report Posted June 24, 2007 I hope Belle, Matilda and Annie are found soon! Update soon please Quote
JosieTash Posted June 25, 2007 Report Posted June 25, 2007 glad you are enjoying !!!! Next chapter will, at worst, be posted this coming sunday [july 1] !!! Quote
Liska Posted June 25, 2007 Author Report Posted June 25, 2007 Great chapter. I hope they find them soon. Quote
belgshep Posted June 26, 2007 Report Posted June 26, 2007 Really cool Chapter 2 and I LOVE the flashbacks for filling us in on what’s happened earlier. Your descriptions are great – I’m really getting the “feeling” of the trio in that darkened room!! Quote
JosieTash Posted June 26, 2007 Report Posted June 26, 2007 LOVING the comnets !!! Form the draft [handwritten version] that i've penned, i think this will be approx a 10 chapter story !! Quote
belgshep Posted July 1, 2007 Report Posted July 1, 2007 GREAT Chapter 3 – and the cross refs back to KMA are cool! Gosh, so Cassie’s one of the druggies too. I was expecting Alex, as per H&A, but didn’t really guess that Cassie would also be involved – though, given her track-record with Macca, I guess it IS predictable!!! Spaced-out Cassie is intriguing, and (with thoughts of the kind of place Sal was held captive), will the time Cassie is spending in that gloomy place looking after the captives mean that her wondrous tan fades?!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He, he! Quote
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