amz89 Posted December 2, 2009 Report Posted December 2, 2009 Im not liking Ruby at all, so not good, hope things work out there, poor Belle, aden find her soon. I'm not sure if I'm right but I noticed this it sounded to me it should of said Ruby? Meanwhile, in the kitchen, Geoff was helping Nicole with the food. She has prepared cocktail sausages, chicken nuggets, spicy wedges, chips, burgers and fish fingers. Geoff thought that was very thoughtful. Whenever he was at a party, nobody would have prepared food. “Ready to go then?” Geoff asked, making sure she could carry her share of the plates. “I‘m ready, lets go” Nicole smiled.
HeavenForbid Posted December 2, 2009 Report Posted December 2, 2009 amz89 said: Im not liking Ruby at all, so not good, hope things work out there, poor Belle, aden find her soon. I'm not sure if I'm right but I noticed this it sounded to me it should of said Ruby? Meanwhile, in the kitchen, Geoff was helping Nicole with the food. She has prepared cocktail sausages, chicken nuggets, spicy wedges, chips, burgers and fish fingers. Geoff thought that was very thoughtful. Whenever he was at a party, nobody would have prepared food. “Ready to go then?” Geoff asked, making sure she could carry her share of the plates. “I‘m ready, lets go” Nicole smiled. I read over that chapter twice for mistakes. That was supposed to be Ruby. Thank you for noticing, shall go back and edit now.
amz89 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Posted December 3, 2009 HeavenForbid said: amz89 said: Im not liking Ruby at all, so not good, hope things work out there, poor Belle, aden find her soon. I'm not sure if I'm right but I noticed this it sounded to me it should of said Ruby? Meanwhile, in the kitchen, Geoff was helping Nicole with the food. She has prepared cocktail sausages, chicken nuggets, spicy wedges, chips, burgers and fish fingers. Geoff thought that was very thoughtful. Whenever he was at a party, nobody would have prepared food. “Ready to go then?” Geoff asked, making sure she could carry her share of the plates. “I‘m ready, lets go” Nicole smiled. I read over that chapter twice for mistakes. That was supposed to be Ruby. Thank you for noticing, shall go back and edit now. Thats okay. =)
HeavenForbid Posted December 5, 2009 Report Posted December 5, 2009 Thank you all for the comments. Here is the next chapter for you all. Chapter Six Belle sat on her bed. She was holding onto her pillow tightly, tears rolls down her cheeks. How was she going to explain Drew’s re-appearance to Aden? It had been ten minutes since Drew left, with his last line sending chills down her back… “Drew…” “How are you doing, Taylor?” Drew smiled, coming into the light to get a good look at his ex-girlfriend. “You‘re looking great!” “What are you doing here?” Belle replied, stepping away from him. “It’s been two years…” Drew began “Since I left Summer Bay…Not one day goes by when I don‘t think about…us” “Drew, I…” Belle didn’t know what to say to him. She was still in a state of shock “I will get you back, Taylor” Drew smirked as he came right into her face and kissed her on the cheek. He turned away and walked off. How am I going to explain this to Aden? She asked herself. He wouldn’t be happy to hear he is back in town, after what happened two years ago between them. She went into her bedroom and rang Aden. She begged him to pick up, not knowing what had happened at the party. “Hey Aden. Um…I…I‘m not feeling well so I don‘t think I‘ll go to the party after all. I‘ll see you tomorrow. Love you” She put down the phone and sat starting out the window, not knowing what she was going to do now. Everything had been so prefect between her and Aden and this was going to turn their worlds upside down. * * * * * Aden had dropped Nicole home and went to look around the town for Geoff. Geoff was sitting on the beach when Aden found him. The wind was blowing into their faces, it was a nice breeze. The two boys sat and thought about the nights events. “You ever have problems with Belle?” Geoff asked his best friend. “Strangely enough, no.” Aden answered “I think we are both right for each other” “I wish Nicole and I were like that…” Geoff wished, looking glum. “Hey, man!” Aden said, caringly, putting his hand Geoff’s shoulder “You guys are just having a rough time right now. You‘ll both come over it.” Geoff shook his head “I honestly don‘t think so Aden. She has been so petty since Ruby came to the Bay. It‘s not like anything is going on. Anytime I have seen her, Nic has been with me” Aden laughed “You‘d think after dating someone for two years you‘d know about girls. But not you!” “What do you mean?” Geoff asked, still quite upset. “She feels threatened by Ruby. Nicole is a gorgeous girl. But when a new girl comes into town, just as beautiful, it‘s obvious they will feel threatened.” “I guess you right” Geoff replied “But she has nothing to worry about! I don‘t have feelings for Ruby” “Well, lets be honest here Geoff…” Aden began “Ever since we met her, she does like to chat to you the most. And I think that is what is worrying here.” “Yes, Aden. Talking!” Geoff rolled his eyes at how ridiculous Aden’s statement was. “You don‘t see it how girls do. When another girl is in their territory, they will do anything to keep the ones they love” “Aden…” Geoff started, smirking “What books do you be reading?!” ““The 1000 things you need to know about girls” by “Belle Taylor”” Aden smirked “She teaches me all I need to know” “I must get that book and take some notes” Geoff replied “Come on, we better get back.” “Yeah, I had a missed call from Belle. Probably wondering where I am” Aden said as he stood up. As they walked up the beach, Aden listened to Belle’s voicemail. “Hmm…” “What’s up?” Geoff asked, putting his shoes back on “Oh nothing. Come on, better get back” Aden began to rush Geoff. He needed to make sure Belle was feeling better. * * * * * Ruby was alone in her house. She was finishing up the cleaning after the party. The front door was wide open, to let some air in. She grabbed the black bags she had filled and put them by the door. She smiled as she saw shadow walking up her driveway. “Was wondering when you‘d come…” She flirted when he came to the door. “I just came for my money” The person snapped. “Hold your horses” Ruby laughed. She put her had into her top and down her bra where she kept her money. She took out a 50 dollar note and gave it to him standing at the door. “Sorry the plan didn‘t work out like you wanted, Rubs” “What do you mean?” Ruby asked, as she began taking the bags to the bin outside. “Well what did you want to happen?” he questioned, helping her with the bin bags. “What exactly happened, Nathan.” Ruby smirked “You to kiss Nicole and Geoff to see… I have to do this slowly or else I wont get Geoff.” “I had to force her to kiss him, it was hard work” Nathan complained “I think that means you deserve another 50!” Ruby said as she took out another 50 dollar note and gave it to Nathan. “I best be off” Nathan said putting the $50 into his pocket. Ruby began touching his chest “Why…don’t you come in for a bit? I have a couple of more ways I can thank you for tonight” She winked and walked into the house, followed quickly by Nathan. Who would refuse a girl like Ruby Buckton? Preview: Reveal hidden contents - The gang get ready for the last year in school. - Aden finds out that Drew is back in Summer Bay.
matticus01 Posted December 5, 2009 Report Posted December 5, 2009 Drews come back for Belle Ruby is just Poor Belle... I too am worried what Drew may have up his sleeve.... Quote ““The 1000 things you need to know about girls” by “Belle Taylor”” ^^^ That line just amde me update soon
tessalove Posted December 5, 2009 Report Posted December 5, 2009 I officially hate Ruby in this!! Grr! I'm Glad Geoff's eeing how Nic is feeling now though! Uopdate soon! El x
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 5, 2009 Report Posted December 5, 2009 Oh, Ruby really is trouble, isn't she?Drew was slightly creepy with Belle, hopefully he won't cause too many problems...
adellejefferiesxox Posted December 5, 2009 Report Posted December 5, 2009 Quote ““The 1000 things you need to know about girls” by “Belle Taylor”” Aden smirked “She teaches me all I need to know” LOVED THAT LINE!! That situation with Drew coming back would have made a good storyline, her feelings are true and I can imgaine that happening. I assume Aden will get very protective over Belle as he thinks he'll have some competition. That was such a great chapter, thank you for having lots of Belle/Adelle/Drew in it Please update sooon!!!!
Georgia Posted December 6, 2009 Report Posted December 6, 2009 Woah, great chapter Ruby is more evil than I thought... paying someone to kiss Nicole Hope Geoff and Nic can get past this! Loving all the Adelle moments, you write them so well... especially love Belle's book Update reaaaaaaly soon.
Danni02 Posted December 6, 2009 Report Posted December 6, 2009 So Drew is back to cause some trouble between Aden and Belle... And Ruby, Oh my I dont like her much in this! Nasty girl. Really hope she doesnt succeed in her plan to get Geoff! Update soon!
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