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GASP!!! I love how you did that, [i was leaning in to the screen as i read!] i could just completely imagine that Belle wouldn't say anything and Aden would figure it out on his own! I wonder if she'll tell him the whole truth now, he's gonna feel so bad...

Can't wait for more, please put the next chapter up tonight! Please! please please please please!!!!!!! :D

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Aden is going to be devasted as he realises it was his doing, but that chapter was done really well and I love the way you wrote Belle's emotions and how she didnt fear him despite the fact he was inflicting pain upon her.

I hope Aden doesnt beat himself up too much about it, he didnt mean to do but knowing Aden he will hate himself. :(

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Oh poor Aden he's beating himself up so much and self flagellation is just so unattractive (as an exponent myself), Belle seems to spend her whole time defending herself for hiding things and this time I feel she may have been justified she can't say she wasn't warned right from the first time. Like how this ties back to your previous fic.

Having a long word moment!!!!

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