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If someone had taken my chocolate they wouldnt be here anymore! :P

Aww Aden and this bit:

“You do realise that if you fall asleep now, I’m not going to be able to move, right?”

“That’s your problem.” She told him, her hands curling to grip softly onto his top while he stroked back her hair. “Do you want to move?”

“Yes.” Aden said forthrightly, hearing her exhale deeply before loosening her hold on him slowly. “I’m kidding, I’m kidding. Go to sleep. I’m not going anywhere, anyway.” He felt her hands tighten once more, a ghost of a smile playing on her lips as she did so.

“I know you’re not.”

Too cute x

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That last chapter was so cute.

It had everything I like in this story. Mattie and Belles friendship, cute Adelle moments, Belles positive feelings about her growing relationship with Amanda, and some Belle/Annie(I like her here) and Belle/Irene interaction.

So sweet that Belle made Annie a bridesmaid. Their worry about Amanda outfit was really funny. If it was the bit about Irene and the chocolate that had you worried about being OOC I don't think you should as it was too funny that it didn't matter to me whether it was OOC or not.

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you are a miracle worker, I have the biggest smile on my face :D

I loved that chapter!!!!

Loved Aden in the house, sooo sweet!

Loved Adelleness in the diner and beach,

methinks Nicole is going to be in a lot of trouble :P

Cant wait till the next chapter!!!!!!

Update soon

xxx

oh and thanks that really cheered me up, :D

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