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Good chapter. I liked the 'blaming' bit, especially Belle's reasoning for blaming him for something else and Belle's 'Stop trying to blame me' comment. That made me laugh. Infact there was a lot of funny moments here. The end was sweet. I'm glad that the baby is finally here.

Please update soon.

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Sorry i haven't commented before now, i haven't had the chance to read this and concentrate on it properly til now.

The first thing i have to say is YAY! ADEN WAS RIGHT! IT'S A GIRL!

Secondly: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the sweetest giving birth ever! Loved the description of the baby as perfect! I think the chapter was the perfect length as well.

Thirdly: Just WOW to the whole chapter!

Fourthly: LMAO at some of the things Belle and Aden were saying to each other during her labour! Soooo funny!!!!!

AMAZING CHAPTER!!!! Can't wait for more! Hope you can update soon! :D

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I am indeed a lifesaver.... hehehe just kidding

:wub: The scene with Sierra and Aden made my heart melt, it got me all teary

LOVE the name and the nickname... so different yet beautiful

I loved the convo about her name and wether she liked them or not lol I could totally imagine that

Another brilliant update! they'll mke such good parents :D

The emotion was so well written, just perfect

Cannot wait for more!

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awwwwwwwww that chapter was just perfect!!!!!!!

That beginning was just so cute with Aden and Krissy, so :wub::wub:

the name is perfect Sierra Kristal Jeffries. and then fact it was Aden's mums name just made it more amazing!

I cant wait till the next chapter!

xxx

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what can i say other than Awwwwwwwww! :wub:

Sierra Kristal :wub:

she is so gonna be a daddy's girl!

The scene at the begining with her and Aden was so amazing, i could see it happening!

I am grinning soooooooo much right now! gonna have face ache in the morning!

LOVED IT! can't wait for more!!

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