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:o Nicole! :( I hope she'll be okay.

Belle should dump David. Aden is right. If she can't trust him, then their relationship won't last.

I'm glad Martha and the baby are okay. It's a good thing she managed to scratch her attacker. The police will already have one clue.

Mattie and Lucas are so sweet.

More please. :D

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Good chapter.

I liked the talk between Aden and Belle. As well as the scene between Mattie and Lucas. I'm really interested to see what's going to happen with Martha and Nicole now.

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Wow! This is one heck of a fic. I like the different backgrounds that you've given the characters. It's so fresh, even though the fic is very dark.

I don't like the sound of this David guy... <_< He sounds like a real tool. I hope Belle does dump him, because there's no relationship without trust. I really like the Mattie and Lucas stuff, but the ending! I hope Nicole's ok!!

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