HAA Girl 08 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Nicole! I hope she will be okay. Hmm, David. I'm not sure if I trust him - he's out of town... he could be the attacker! Poor Martha. Glad her baby is ok. Can't wait for more, Bec. This is really good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Looptroop Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Yay! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 oh god Nicole!! let her be ok!! i wonder what geoff is going to do?? i loved how you wrote luc and maddie - it's really good!! please update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Nicole! I hope she'll be okay. Belle should dump David. Aden is right. If she can't trust him, then their relationship won't last. I'm glad Martha and the baby are okay. It's a good thing she managed to scratch her attacker. The police will already have one clue. Mattie and Lucas are so sweet. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Nicole! I hope she'll be OK. Glad Martha and the baby are both OK. David's out of town. Wonder is he's the attacker? Can't wait to read more. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Good update.Aden was so trying to get Belle to dump David at the start.Glad Martha's okay but now I'm worried about Nicole... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 (edited) Good chapter. I liked the talk between Aden and Belle. As well as the scene between Mattie and Lucas. I'm really interested to see what's going to happen with Martha and Nicole now. Edited August 12, 2009 by Jody Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Oh noes Nicole I loved the little Mattie/Lucas scene at the start, so sweet I'm actually thinking of starting another fic myself (yes, ANOTHER one ) something a little supernatural and different... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 I hope Nic'c ok!!! Update soon!! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Wow! This is one heck of a fic. I like the different backgrounds that you've given the characters. It's so fresh, even though the fic is very dark. I don't like the sound of this David guy... He sounds like a real tool. I hope Belle does dump him, because there's no relationship without trust. I really like the Mattie and Lucas stuff, but the ending! I hope Nicole's ok!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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