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matticus01

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I love this. It's awesome. So wasn't expecting his behavior to be due to a tumor. But I hope he pulls through and I hope that they can sort things out properly, and then we can really see if it was the tumor and not just him being a jerk.

I love the way you're writing this though, you're very talented, with so much mystery at the end of every chapter, I have to admit I am partial to a good ol' cliffhanger from time to time. And I love how you're writing Belle's thoughts, feelings and concerns on the matter, making us really feel her pain an worry.

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more. :D

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Oh gosh.That is a brilliant twist, damned if you do and damned if you don't.Kinda holding out hope that at least Aden will recover consciousness and he and Belle can talk it over so she doesn't have to make the choice herself.Really, really looking forward to where you go with this.

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