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matticus01

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“I’m here to talk to you, so just let me in before I fall to my death”, Aden yelled melodramatically

hehehhehehehehehe. that line made me laugh like there was no tomorrow hahahahaha :lol:

You are welcome, you are getting much better with your writing and that's what I love about you now... you take on board the criticism and compliments without complaint :D

Keep up the amazing chapters

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It really is looking as though Aden has put Belle through some seriously bad stuff.If he ever wants to stand a chance of getting her back, I think he needs to understand that rather than just pulling the same stunts he's done before.Really looking forward to seeing where you take this.

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