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“I can’t marry you, because I’ve reached that line Aden, and I’ve fallen over it”

^^^That line... that line there is what got me hooked on this fic, and proofing it for you has been a privilege.

Since your first chapter, you have improved so much

brilliant first chapter G :)

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and you were worried about the reviews and that people wouldn't like it :lol:

Brilliant again...

“Goodbye Aden”, she whispered, pressing a kiss softly to his cheek and walking back to the diner to resume her shift, all the time pondering if she had made the right decision.

^^^^That line.... literally left me pondering over what would happen next :D

AND I'm proofing it for you lol!

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