matticus01 Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 “I can’t marry you, because I’ve reached that line Aden, and I’ve fallen over it” ^^^That line... that line there is what got me hooked on this fic, and proofing it for you has been a privilege. Since your first chapter, you have improved so much brilliant first chapter G Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 That is so good! I loved it! Its a really good idea! Update soon! Ly el xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 I'm really interested to see where you go with this and exactly what could have happened to push them to that point.Looking forward to more of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 It's very intriguing so far. Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Love this, great start Georgia. Can't wait for more. x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Oh my god, that was bloody brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it !!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!! You just keep getting better and better! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 He hit her! Poor Belle. This is really interesting, can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 and you were worried about the reviews and that people wouldn't like it Brilliant again... “Goodbye Aden”, she whispered, pressing a kiss softly to his cheek and walking back to the diner to resume her shift, all the time pondering if she had made the right decision. ^^^^That line.... literally left me pondering over what would happen next AND I'm proofing it for you lol! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 He hit her?I'm not surprised she's had enough.All the same, a big part of her seems to regret the way things turned out and maybe the separation isn't as complete as she says it is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 aden is a arse. Cant wait for more georgie. X Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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