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That was a really good chapter.

Poor Ruby! I'm not sure running away is the best thing to do but that's not the best thing to walk in on. I wonder how her and Annie running away will go. I, also, really liked the chat between Jai and Annie. Finally someone talked some sense in to her.

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That was a great chapter.

I knew Ruby would get hurt, but I wasn't expecting it to be this soon, or in that way. I just assumed that Nicole would dump her.

I loved the talk between Annie and Jai, and I'm glad he's knocked some sense into her

Annie and Ruby running away... well at least Annie is being a supportive friend, I'm not too sure how the rest of it will go...

Update soon :D

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