Anaya Posted October 19, 2009 Report Posted October 19, 2009 Phew! Finally caught up. Ch. 9 had a real familiarity to it. What with Roman/Jacko & crew all plotting away to get the latest bad guy, Ella being out of the loop but inevitably finding out, getting upset, slamming doors (or not in this case ) and then Roman having to make up by being all cute. Good times. Even though the plan to trap Elliot felt a little too obvious & with any other bad guy I'd find it hard to believe that they would find the Roman/Mike act so believable. Yet Elliot, with his tunnel vision when it comes to seeking revenge on Roman, makes it easy to believe that he would fall in to the trap & that he'd only see what he wants to see. Not sure if any of that made sense, but you're getting it anyway. Lol! Also Roman's declaration/non-confession of love for Ella to Mike/Jacko was so gorgeous. And Sammy is such a sweetie. N'awwww! Loved the humour that was dotted about in that chapter too, you write it well. Unlike Ella, I loved that last part of Ch 10. Yeah he is the strong guy, always there, supportive & protective, Hardcore, hero husband. And he may not always express it, but he does have feelings/emotions of his own too, and it's about time someone reached out to him. So well done Rachel, even though it meant El getting the wrong idea. Loved the Rola fluff early on in that chapter. And Roman with more muscles... Anaya wants one. I'm glad you had Ella bring up the Rachel issue straightaway & didn't drag it out. I liked the chat they had about her jealousy/insecurities and again loved the fluff that followed. Humourous parts were enjoyable to read too like the Jacko/chapel story & the Grandpa references. The family scene with the kids was too cute. Lastly Ch. 12 was my absoloute favourite. Not because I'm a sadistic type that likes watching Rola fighting, then El in pain and the kids so upset. Just that the making up & sweet interaction between them all was perfect in amongst all the drama. The kids were so great & cute when supporting each other & Ella when she was in pain. And well this part: “You called me.” He murmured. Aww... soul mates. Quote
pollymoon Posted October 20, 2009 Report Posted October 20, 2009 2 great parts tele, that Elliot must have been so smug seeing ella arrested, you need to sort him out Quote
Georgia Posted October 20, 2009 Report Posted October 20, 2009 The first update was beautifully written, and came across like a tug of war. I loved it, although I was scared their relationship was going to end. But the second update made me mad Arrest Elliot for taking advantage of someone with memory loss... not Ella. Nah I'm joking. They were two amazing chapters. Update soon Tele. Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Posted October 20, 2009 Some awesome updates! *growls* Ella getting arrested??? That Elliot is going to be in really serious trouble, not just from Roman but from us, the readers!!! I loved Chapter 13 - glad that Roman and Ella finally had THAT talk - they needed it - hopefully, now they can move on....eventually - we just need to get Elliot out of the way! Looking forward to the next one! Quote
Anaya Posted October 20, 2009 Report Posted October 20, 2009 So I was like double update... Yay! Only to realise you like to give with one hand, and take back with the other. But I'll forgive you because of the gorgeousness of Ch. 13 alone. At last there communication between Roman & El. Without any games, without any holding back, without any sex/love making diversions (although I do love those ), and lastly without one of them walking out (running away). Woop. Woop! It was mature, they were fully honest with each other & they confronted each & every issue hurting them. It was sweet & emotional & cute & real & just perfect. Well written, Tele. And well bubbles have to burst sometime so I guess I should have expected Elliot to resurface again soon. Look forward to see where it all goes. I knew Charlie had a reason (Elliot) to go in there like that and arrest El in such a harsh manner in front of her children. Liked their exchange at the end though, it was funny. So can we look forward to double updates all the time from now on? Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Posted October 20, 2009 Ohhh....that was brilliant! (not the part where Ella was arrested or taken to the hospital by the way!) Can't wait to see what happens next! Quote
tessalove Posted October 20, 2009 Report Posted October 20, 2009 Great update! Hope Ella's ok!! update soon...... Elx Quote
jdoddy Posted October 20, 2009 Report Posted October 20, 2009 I did wonder when the little issue of Bigamy would raise its ugly head, hope they can get it sorted without too much strife, and the gaps in Ella's memory still leave alot to be explored.. I really liked the little Geoff/Nic scenes in previous chapters, the relationship seemed a little rocky at the beginning but I am glad its starting to even out. I also found the little exchange between Roman and Elliot interesting, and those last lines made me think of the classic Starsky and Hutch partnership.. looking forward to further installments.. Quote
pollymoon Posted October 21, 2009 Report Posted October 21, 2009 2 great parts tele, sad to see Ella so upset but Good to see her letting Roman be there for her and a lovely little Girl For nicole and Geoff, Brilliant as usual Quote
Georgia Posted October 21, 2009 Report Posted October 21, 2009 Mira That is such a beautiful name, and such a beautiful reason. And I loved the interaction between Ella and Roman, as always. Update again soon. Quote
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