Red Ranger 1 Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Ohhh, got a nasty feeling something bad's going to happen to Jake... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted January 26, 2010 Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 I LIKE THIS!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted January 26, 2010 Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 CHAPTER 32 "Good morning" Laura said as Jake walk into the kitchen the next morning and sat down. Joel sat down and reached over to grab the cerial "Can't you i'm making omlets?" Laura said "Damn, i wanted waffles so bad" Jake said "What are your pans for today?" Laura asked Jake "Actually i was hoping i could come to work with you" Jake said "Work?, just stay home for a few more days" Laura said "If i stay home one more day i am going to go crazy" Jake snapped "Ok, i guess it'll be alright" she told him. "I'm gonna go see Amanda first, i left on bad terms last night" Jake said standing "What's that on your arm?" Joel asked noticing self inflicted injury. "A burn" Jake replied "How'd you get burnt" Joel asked "I burnt myself with a hot cigarette lighter" Jake said "I'll met you at the cafe mum" Jake said and walked out. -- Jake walked into Amanda's room and saw her dressed and packing her bags. "Leaving?" Jake said "Yeah, i was gonna call you when i got home" Amanda said and kissed him. "Came back" Kitty said standing behind them Jake sighed "You know i figured out why you hate me so much" Jake said turning towards Kitty "Why?" she replied sarcasticly "Because you'll never get my dick in your dry out old vag, you old bitch" Jake said in a loud voice Both Kitty and Amanda were stunned. Kitty slapped Jake so hard across the face it made his ears ring As he turned to walked out he heard Amanda say "I'll call you" He turned a gave her a smile. CHAPTER 33 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Woah, was not expecting Jake to be self-harming!Great twist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 CHAPTER 33 Jake was standing behind the counter at the cafe just after taking someones order when he saw Wolfie wlk in selling raffle tickets. "Hey Wolf Wolf" Jake said "Hey dude, Joel said you'd be here" Wolfie replied "What's that?" Jake asked looking at the raffle tickets "It's for helping cure the blind" Wolfie told him "The blind?" "Ok, i need money to buy a car and dad said i have to find it my own way" Wolfie said "Is this even legal?" Jake asked "Who cares" Wolfie replied "Anyway i came to see if you're coming to some kid from school's pool party?" Wolfie asked Jake made a sigh kind of noise "I don't know" Jake replied "Come on, Harley talked Amanda into going. Just so you can sort out your differences" Wolfie started to nag "We're fine" Jake told him "That's not what Amanda said. She said she can't look at you without seeing the baby and it hurts her too much" Wolfie said "She said that?" Jake asked "Yes, now come on, do you want me to get my knees and beg or sing or undo my pants" Wolfie nagged "Ok fine, i'll be a little late though, i gotta lock up here" Jake said "Awesome dude" Wolfie said and ran out" CHAPTER 34 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 CHAPTER 34 Amanda and Harley were dancing at the party while a guy was watchimg Amanda "I'm gonna go get us a couple of drinks ok" Harley said "Alcohol, see if you can get alcohol" Amanda replied Harley smiled "I'll see what i can do" Harley replied Amanda ran her fingers through her hair and then started dance by herself "Hey" the guy who was watching them said "Hey" she replied "Do you wanna dance?" he asked her "I am" she told her "I'm Dean" he told her "Amanda" she replied "Do you have a boyfriend" Dean asked "Um, no" she lied He put his arms around her "You're really hot, you know that" he said "Thanks" she said and kissed him -- Jake dragged his feet slowly around to the back of the house. "Hey" Nancy said "Hey, have you seen Amanda?" Jake asked "She around somewhere" she replied "Thanks" he said and started to move through the crowd but stopped when he saw Amanda kissing Dean He turned around and started to walk away "Hey where are you going" Wolfie asked "I don't know if i locked the shop or not" "Alright well come straight back" Wolfie said Jake gave a fake smile and walked out CHAPTER 35 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 CHAPTER 35 Amanda walked through Jake's front gate and saw him sitting on a swing which in the front yard. She sat on the other swing next to him. "Hey" said "How how you didn't go the party last night?" she asked him "I went, for like two minutes" Jaje replied He stood up and she also did after him. She wrapped her arms around him and kissed him on the neck "I was think about us this morning. I thought maybe we could make a fresh start. I mean well we can't forget about Cici, she will always be in our lives even though she's gone" Amanda said Jake pulled away "Whats up with you?" she asked "Who was he?" Jake asked "Who?" Amanda replied "Don't play the perfect innocent girfriend act Amanda. I saw you kissing him last night" Jake told her "His name was Dean and i'm really sory it just happened. It's just he said i was hot and he was really sweet" she replied "And i'm not" he said "Yes" she said "Di you sleep with him?" Jake asked Amanda looked down and didn't answer the question. "Did you sleep with him?" he asked again "Yes" she finally said "Get away from me" he pushing her away as she came close "I'm sorry like i said it just happened" Amanda said starting to cry "Don't Amanda, i don't wanna hear it" Jake said "Jake, i love you. Please just give me another chance" Amanda cried "Go away" he told her as he walked inside and shut the door Amanda stood there and cried CHAPTER 36 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Oh boy, Amanda's messed up big time.This could be the end for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 CHAPTER 36 Jake shut his locker "Hey can we talk?" Amanda asked standing beside him. Jake took a deeo breath "40 seconds" he told her "Ok, i know i messed up, but i do love love you and can we give us another go, please?" Amanda said "Your 40 seconds are up" Jake said and walked away "Jake" Amanda called "Were you gonna tell me, or were you gonna pretend it never happened?" Jake asked "I was gonna pretend" Amanda replied They walked into class. Jake sat next to a girl he'd never met. "Today, we are going to get to know each other. Let everyon know about your childhood" The teacher who was Ms Black, a woman Jake hated "Why?" Amanda asked "Because i want all of you to get to know each other, to know other people than the groups of people who hang around with" Ms Black replied "That's an invasion of privacy, don't you think" Jake said "Mr Barry how about we start with you, then Ms Vale your next for your interuption". "We're waiting" Ms Black said "I grew up in an extremely bad neighbourhood. with a father who had an iron fist, a mother who turned a blind eye to the sexual assults and other things the nightmare are made of, my sister and my brother left when i was 11, leving me all alone with dad now imagine what i just said but 20 billion times worse , my bother came back last year because he thought somebody should've stayed to protect an innocent teenager but he was way too late. I was raped and tortured everyday from between the ages of 11 to 13. I have no idea where my sister is, last i heard it was Italy. Oh and to top it off i got my girlfriend pregnant but the baby died not long after it was born, and recently my girlfriend decided to be a slag and cheat on me with a guy named Dean. Can anyone top that?" Jake said getting up and walking out of the classroom. Amanda, Wolfie and Harley got up after him and followed him out of the classroom. "Ms Vale, it your turn" Ms black called. CHAPTER 37 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Oh boy.That teacher is definitely a cow, the way she was completely uninterested in Jake's outburst was nicely written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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