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CHAPTER 13

Amanda walked over to the duke box and pushed buttons on it to play a song

She started singing

"I know I stand in line until you think

You have the time to spend an evening with me

And if we go someplace to dance

I know that there's a chance you won't be leaving with me

And afterwards we drop into a quiet little place

And have a drink or two

And then I go and spoil it all by saying

Something stupid like I love you

I can see it in your eyes that you despise

The same old lines you heard the night before

And though it's just a line to you for me it's true

And never seemed so right before

I practice everyday to find some clever lines

To say to make the meaning come true

But then I think I'll wait until the evening gets late

And I'm alone with you

The time is right your perfume fills my head

The stars get red and on the nights so blue

And then I go and spoil it all by saying

Something stupid like I love you"

Jake laughed

"I'm sorry i've been avoiding you" she told him

"It's ok, you were scared" Jake repled

"No i was being complete cow, i was just thinking of myself and i didn't care about your feelings"

"How your mum take the news?" he asked

"Well, i didn't tell her until last night and that was because she caught me reading books on pregnancy" Amanda said

Jaked raised his eyebrows

"She kicked me out" Amanda said

"What?"

"Well it was either that or i put you up on rape charges" Amanda told him

"I guess i should be thankful then" he said

"So where does this leave us?" she asked

He rested his forehead against hers.

"Well after your aweful singing of one of the worst songs ever, i think we should be ok" he assured her.

"Good, because i was thinking we could be a family. The three of us, i don't know how it'll work but we can cross that bridge when we come to it" Amanda told him.

He smiled and lifted her into his arms.

"Sounds great. Just no more singing" he told her

CHAPTER 14 UP SOON

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CHAPTER 14

Jake knocked on Kitty's front door.

She opened it

Jake stood there with his folded.

"So she sends her trashy boyfriend around to help her to get me to take her back in" Kitty said

Jake's brown hair was messy and he stood wearing a baggy shirt and jeans with a hole in the right knee.

"No, i came around to tell she's better off without you" Jake said

"Excuse me" Kitty said

"You heard me" he replied

"You are a pathetic exuse for a boy, you're rubbish so is your family and seeing Amanda is dating you that makes her Rubbish and i don't like rubbish in my house" Kitty told him

"And you were going to make her lie"

"About rape charges, i'm still considering that. I don't want people think my daughter had sex with a good for nothing little joke" Kitty told him

Jake mutted something under his breath Kitty couldn't understand.

"Words that i don't hear can't hurt little boy, now leave.

CHAPTER 15 UP SOON

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CHAPTER 15

Jake walked into the kitchen

"Where'd you get to last night" Laura asked

"I went to see Amanda's mum" Jake replied

":Is Amanda the chick you knocked up?" Jakes brother Joel asked

"Yes" he replied

And i am so not trashy" Jake said

"Is that what she said?" Laura asked

"Yes" Jake said

"Well you should've just mentioned Amanda's dad, that would have put her back in her place" Laura told him.

"Why?"

"He left her for a teenager because she wasn't good in bed"

Both Jake and Joel grinned.

"You should bring Amanda around tonight for dinner" Laura said

"I'm cooking fish" she told them

"I don't eat fish" Joel told her

"That's not what you tell me" Jake replied and the both laughed

CHAPTER 16 UP SOON

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CHAPTER 16

"So we were all laughing about what happened. Then Clay decides he wants this chicks number, So Jakey goes i dare you go up to her naked. So he strips, but that's not all the dare was" Wolfie was telling Amanda and her friends.

"Keep going" Nncy said

"Jake dared Clay to rub her tits while he asked for her number." Wolfie continued

"And did you" Amanda asked

"Yes" Clay said

"And for the record i didn't think he'd do it" Jake told them

"What happened" Harley asked

"Well she was the owners daughter, so we're banned for life" Wolfie replied.

"If Jake or Wolfie had have done that, they would have got her number and they would have also got laid" Clay said

"You shouldn't think like that, we all are good looking in our way but you just weren't in her eyes" Amanda said

"Thankyou" Clay said

"So Amanda, where you gonna live when you have this baby" Wolfie asked

"Because Harley's family wont want a baby in the house"

"I haven't thought about it yet, but i've still got time" she replied

"Thought of any names?" Nancy asked

"It's bad luck to think of names this early" she replied

CHAPTER 17 UP SOON

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CHAPTER 17

"Hey" Amanda said to Jake as he put his books in his locker.

"Hey" he muttered back.

"I was thinking i could come over tonight" Amanda said

"No, i'm studying at Wolfie's" he told her looking down

"What happened to your eye?" Amanda asked

"Helping Joel fix his car and i hit my head on the bonet" he lied

"And your arm?" she asked noticing a burn

"Radiator was hot" he said

"i gotta get to class" he said and kissed her.

CHAPTER 18 UP SOON

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