standbyme Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 CHAPTER 9 Don't use those ones" Harley said blocking the door as Amanda went to walk into the toilets. "What, why" Amanda asked "They're broken" Harley lied "All of them?" Amanda said "Just don't go in there please" Harley said "Why?" People walked past her making baby noises. "I am so sorry" Harley said "For what?" Amanda asked "Nancy told me you were pregnant. She thought we both could be there for you. But i told Wolfie and he told just about everyone" Harley told her "Where's Jake?" Amanda asked "He's getting the same sort of treatment. Except your being called a slag while Jake's being called a perv" Harley "I gotta find him" CHAPTER 10 UP SOON " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Ohhh, I can't believe Amanda's getting a hard time.I hope she's all right.She probably won't be though, will she? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 CHAPTER 10 Amanda sat at the back of the classroom watching all the other students whisper and pass notes about her. She saw Jake chewing on his pencil as he turned and gave her a slight smile She grabbed her books and walked out of class. "Where's Amanda going?" the teacher asked "Probably to sulk" a girl said and giggled. Jake grabbed his books and did the same "Jake" the teacher called "Amanda" Jake called "What?" she said "What's wrong with you, you've been ignoring me all day" Jake said "This is your fault" she yelled "What's my fault?" he asked "This" she said pointing to her stomach. "You willingly opened your legs" he yelled Amanda slaped him "You're a ***** you know that. When i first started dating you everyone was like how can you date Kitty Lansdown's daughter. But i saw a different side of you" "Well thats good for you" she said walking away And i am not a *****" she yelled CHAPTER 11 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Oh dear, things are going wrong between them.I get the impression Jake really cares about her but she just can't see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 CHAPTER 11 Jake closed his locked door and started to walk down the hallway. He saw People standing around a wall laughing. He pushed through them and saw a photo of a pregnant Amanda with slag written aboove it. He ripted it down. "Who artwork is this?" he yelled Hsaw a guy smiling "Is it yours?" The guy smiled again Jake punched him. "Do you idiots, no scratch that future mother teresa's have any idea what Amand might be going through" No one in the crowd said anything "She's about to become a mother. How do you think she feels?" Jake yelled They still were silent. "So if any of tosses have anything else to say now's the time" he yelled they remained silent "I didn't think so" CHAPTER 12 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Glad that Jake's sticking up for her but I'm worried that he and Amanda aren't talking... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 CHAPTER 11 Jake walked into the kitchen where his mother was chopping vegetables "Mum we need to talk" Jake said "Is this about Amanda being pregnant?" Laura asked "You know" Jake replied "A few kids came in laughing about it yesterday" "Why didn't you say anything?" he asked "Because i was wondering how long it would take before you told me" she replied "You're not angry" Jake said "What's done is done, i am surprised though" she said "About what?" "The fact that you could get it up" she said "mum" Jake said a little embaressed "What does Amanda's mum think?" "I don't know Amanda wont talk to me" he told her "Give her time, she scared" Laura said "So do i just sit around waiting for her to call or something" "She talk to you when she's ready, if not then it's her loss" Laura told him CHAPTER 12 UP SOON " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Glad that Jake's mum took it well, not sure Amanda's will be the same... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 CHAPTER 12 "Hey, theanks for waiting for me" Harley yelled running down the road to catch up to Nancy and Amanda after school. "Yeah well next time hurry up" Nancy said "It wasn't my fault, mr Harrington had to stare at tits for 15 minutes before deciding to give me a detention or not" Harley told them. "What's wrong Amanda" Harley said noticing she was in her own little world. "I went home at lunch time and mum gave me a choice" Amanda said "Choice about what?" Harley asked "I had to claim that Jake raped me or she'd kick me out of home, i cose to get kicked out of home" Amanda said "Jake's been asking about you" Harley changed the topic "Yeahh, how would you know" Amada said "Wolfie told me, and he like Jake's best friend so he would know" Harley said "You should talk to him" Nancy said Amanda sighed "I don't know what to say" she said "You'll think of something" Nancy told her -- Jake walked into Uncle Coffins Cafe. "You late" Uncle Coffin said "No i'm not, i'm actually early" Jake replied "You said 4:00, it's now 4:20" Uncle Coffin said "Yeah well i locked up last night so that makes me early" Jake replied Uncle Coffin smiled "You've got one smart thinkin child Laura" he sang out to Jake's mum. No one knew Uncle Coffins real name. All they knew was he didn't like children but he always thought Jake was diffrent to other children. Uncle Coffin handed Jake an apron "I'm not wearing that" Jake said "Just do as your told for once Jake" Laura said walking past "You said that you'd work here, so you follow the rules like everyone else" Uncle Coffin growled. Jake grabbed the apron and started to tie the back of it up. Amanda walked in CHAPTER 13 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Glad she went to see Jake.Her mum really is a cow, isn't she? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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