Georgia Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Awww Jake was defending Amanda and her honour That is so adorable. Update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 CHAPTER 5 Jake saw Amanda, Nancy and a girl he didn't know sitting on the grass. He saw Nancy was crying. "Hey who died?" he asked being smart. They all looked at him. "Oh my god, did someone really die?" Jake asked feeling bad. "No Nancy's boyfriend dumped her" Amanda said "Girls cry over the most silliest things" he said laying down next to Amanda. "Got some for you" he told her "What?" she asked He gave a dandeline. "Thanks" she said and smiled. "He Jakey, who are your girlfriends" a kid asked "This is Amanda, Nancy and a chick i've never met, girls this is Marcus and Wolfie" The girl laying next to Nancy sat up and smiled "I'm Harley Davidson" she said "My parents are out of town for the week Nancy, Amanda and i were gonna have a girls night tonight. But i could make an exception and invite three boys. That's if you think you can handle us" Harley told them. Jake looked at Amanda and they both smiled. "Count us in" he said CHAPTER 6 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 Can't wait for the party chapter Update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 CHAPTER 6 Wolfie was standing on the kitchen table while Marcus layed down. Wolfie tiped beer from his shoe into Marcus' mouth while Jake took photo's with polaroid camera. Harley and Nancy cheered and banged hard on the table while Amanda raied her eyebrows. Jake smiled "That was disgusting on so many levels" Jake said still taking photos He looked at Amanda who wasn't enjoying herself. He smiled and lifted up his finger and did a motion for her to come closer She stood up and walked over to him and he lifed her up and sat her down on the bench. "You ok?" he asked "Yeah it's just i'm not into doing the same things as you" Amanda replied "So" "And your friends are idiots" Amanda told him hey turned and looked at them. Harley climbed on the table and put her arms around Wolfie. "Lets take this party somewhere else" she said and he smiled the followed her to bedroom "She likes them" Amanda kissed him and got of the bench and started to pull in into a bedroom. CHAPTER 7 UP SOON. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Hmm, looks like Amanda is right, Jake's friends are idiots.I liked that they seem to be setting themselves a part from it a bit.And it looks like something's about to happen... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 CHAPTER 7 Jake woke to see Amanda taking photos of him sleeping. "What are you doing?" he asked rubbing his eyes "Taking photos of you" she replied "Why?" "Because you're cut and i can" "You're wearing my t shirt" he said noticing she was wearing his bon jovi t shirt. "Last night was amazing" she said chaning the subject. "What drinking beer out of shoes?" he said "Thats not what i meant" she told him "Then listning to Wolfie pound Harley all night, i didn't know that Wolfie was that good" She put her finger on his lips "I didn't mean that either" "Then in that case i should say thankyou" She smiled then took one more photo then put the camera down and layed on top of him. "We should have a song" she said "What kind of song?" he said "I don't know just a song that whenever we hear it it reminds us of each other" she told him He started to sing "hang up the chick habit hang it up, daddy, or you'll be alone in a quick hang up the chick habit hang it up, daddy, or you'll never get another fix i'm telling you it's not a trick pay attention, don't be thick or you're liable to get licked you're gonna see the reason why when they're spitting in your eye they'll be spitting in your eye hang up the chick habit hang it up, daddy, a girl's not a tonic or a pill hang up the chick habit hang it up, daddy, you're just jonesing for a spill oh, how your bubble's gonna burst when you meet another nurse she'll be driving in a hearse you're gonna need a heap of glue when they all catch up with you and they cut you up in two now your ears are ringing the birds have stopped their singing everything is turning grey no candy in your till no cutie left to thrill you're alone on a tuesday" "What is that?" she asked "April March, Chick Habit" Hey come on lets go" Nancy said opening the door. CHAPTER 8 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 That was a nice update, they make rather a cute couple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 how awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 CHAPTER 8 Amanda walked into Uncle Coffin's Cafe on closing time. "Hi, are you mrs Barry?" Amanda Asked a woman sweeping the floor. "It's ms actually" the woman replied "Is Jake around?" Amanda asked "Over there" she pointed to a table where Jake was sitting in a chair with his head on the table sleeping. "Thanks" "Are you Kitty Lansdown's daughter?" Jakes mother asked "Yeah i'm Amanda" "I know what your name is. Jake says good things about you all the time. So don't hurt him. Am i clear?" "Now i'm going out the back to lock up" Amanda walked over to Jake. "So you met my mother" Jake said opening his eyes "I thought you were asleep" "I as pretending" Jake said sitting up "Your mother's a..." Amanda started to say "Yeah she's a bit grumpy" "A bit grumpy, Jake she's a *****". Amanda said "So why are you here?" Jake asked "There is something need to tell you and i don't think you're gonna like it" Amanda said "Ok what" Jake said frowning Amanda looked behind her to see if Jakes mum was there She took a deep breath. "I'm pregnant" she said Jake was silent for a bit but then opened his mouth like he was going to say something but didn't "Why?" he finally said "What?" Amanda asked "Why?" Jake asked again "Please tell you've had the talk on where baby's come from" Amanda said "Ye..., what has that got with anything?" Jake replioed "We had sex" Amanda said Jake sat back in his chair "Nancy's the only other person who knows" Amanda told him "You told someone" "Can you imagine me in mother's group?" she started to mock herself "Hi this my baby, i look like it's sister but i'm really it's mother" Jake frowned "People start to have baby's when they're old like 25" Amanda said "25 isn't really old" Jake replied Amanda you're gonna have to leave, i'm locking the front door now Jake's mum said. "We'll talk about this tomorrow" Jake said softly CHAPTER 9 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 Oh, really not sure about Jake's reaction there...Actually quite liked his mum.Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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