Scotcaz22 Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Awww...poor Belle, poor Aden. such a powerful and emotional chapter! Hope the babies are found soon! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Wow such a heartfelt and well written chapter. I have tears in my eyes and I hope the babies are found soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Nicely written chapter.Glad Belle seems to have forgiven Mattie and she's accepting help.Wow, Imogen really is disturbed, isn't she?I actually feel a tiny bit sorry for her but I still hope they get those babies back very quickly... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LauraPhilly!! Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 (edited) Nicely written chapter.Glad Belle seems to have forgiven Mattie and she's accepting help.Wow, Imogen really is disturbed, isn't she?I actually feel a tiny bit sorry for her but I still hope they get those babies back very quickly... Sorry RR1, that was a mistake on my part! Nicole was meant to say 'I'm glad you're awake!' I only just realised it when i read you're comment! I've fixed it now but I'm sorry for the confusion! Edited March 29, 2010 by LauraPhilly!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scotcaz22 Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 omg - Imogen is one crazy lady! I feel sorry for Sean who is being pulled into the fantasy Imogen has. I don't like the sound of the crushed pill in the babies' milk... Here's hoping that somehow things will work out...but is still curious about the twin brother...and what happened to him! You showed an really emotional Aden in this chapter - wow! Can't wait for the next update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Wow so it was Imogen and Sean I should be angry but I just feel so sorry for them! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twinkletoesjess Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 (edited) I have just recently started reading your fic and decided i must write a comment for you. I love the idea of this all being told from after Belle's death via her diary. I think this fic is amazing. Poor Belle and Aden. I cant believe Imogen and Sean took the babies. I kind of feel sorry for Sean as it seems as though he is playing an unwilling part in the kidnapping. No wonder the babies are ill I doubt the crushed pills are going to be any good for them. Imogen is really not doing a good job looking after the babies now is she. I can't believe you left it there . Part of me wants to know what happens next but part of me is scared to read on as I have a feeling things arent going to turn out the way that Belle and Aden want them to. Edited April 3, 2010 by twinkletoesjess Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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