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I was at a bit of a loose end today so I thought I'd have a look at this one.And I am so glad I did because it's brilliant!I love the way you've written Aden's relationship with Rebecca, it really feels like there's a connection between them and they're both getting something important out of it rather than just "Aden, here's another girl."And I like the way you write his relationship with Geoff and especially Nicole as well, you've really captured the characters.And loved the little bit with Aden and Lily...

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That chapter was sooo worth the wait.

The talk between Aden and Rebecca was great. It covered a lot of issues.

I'm glad Aden set Rebecca straight.

So sad when he said he could never be with anyone else again.

Can't wait for the next update.

Thanks for dedicating the chapter to me :D

Georgia

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Had to read back over the last chapter to remember what they were talking about...It's a shame things were awkward between them but honesty is the best policy...sometimes.Be interesting to see where you go from here and if they can manage to be natural around each other again.

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