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Small thing about the timescale - Considering you're following the show, does it mean since the time Aden and Mel had that small scene together, Aden found about her dying, they got married anyway, went away, and now came back and told everyone together? Seems like a lot to do in so little time, even for them. And theres the fact that their has been no mention of the wedding by Mel, Nicole, Annie or Geoff. Or is it canon yet slightly different? It's not really important, just wondering.

I do try and get the timescale right, obviously this isn't canon because Melody isn't back and pregnant in the show but this is one of those stories where I'm imagining that other stuff that isn't directly impacted by that storyline is still happening in sort of the same way.I am currently thinking really hard about where it all fits in so bear with me a moment...The story starts round about the beginning of July 2009, probably very shortly after Claudia left, Geoff and Nicole are back together which obviously deviates from what happens on the show.Melody has the chat with Aden about two weeks later(Chapter 5 concludes a week after she came back and a week passes between 9 and 10)then Chapter 11 is about two weeks after that:In Chapter 12, Nicole implies Melody's been back a month.So I'd say the wedding took place between Chapters 10 and 11 and Aden and Belle have just got back.

Make sense?Please?

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Small thing about the timescale - Considering you're following the show, does it mean since the time Aden and Mel had that small scene together, Aden found about her dying, they got married anyway, went away, and now came back and told everyone together? Seems like a lot to do in so little time, even for them. And theres the fact that their has been no mention of the wedding by Mel, Nicole, Annie or Geoff. Or is it canon yet slightly different? It's not really important, just wondering.

I do try and get the timescale right, obviously this isn't canon because Melody isn't back and pregnant in the show but this is one of those stories where I'm imagining that other stuff that isn't directly impacted by that storyline is still happening in sort of the same way.

I knew I should have phrased that line better. I was only reffering to the Aden/Belle storyline from the show. I got me wondering since theirs been no mention of anything from anyone about a wedding, whether maybe you are following the

cancer/dying

storyline because that bit fit in with that chapter of this fic but not the wedding stuff and all.

To be honest I was only curious because when I read that part about her and Aden going around to tell everyone and considering when that happens in the show, I then thought back to Aden and Mel having conversation just recently (or what I thought was just recently), my first thought was, 'did all that (Aden and Belle) stuff just happen in that space of time'. I guess I just didn't realise, until I read your reply, thats it's actually been a good few weeks since that scene between Aden and Mel here. Anyways it makes sense, looks like it always as. My mistake for not keeping track properly of how much time is passing between scenes/chapters.

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This chapter was sad yet it had an almost calm feeling to it. It actually had that feeling of watching everything thats going on through someone elses eyes, in this case Melody's. That really came across here. Don't know whether that was your intention or not, but I liked it anyway. I don't know if I'm properly explaining what I mean, it made made better sense in my head.

The scene between Geoff and Mel was nice. As for Nicole, if I cared about her character I'd probably would be saying "Geoff loves you, you stupid girl so don't do anything you will regret" but I don't so I'm good with it. After all this twist of events has the potential to be interesting. Or at the very least lead to some really good scenes.

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