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“No, I…”Geoff suddenly cursed the way he’d stonewalled all her entreaties.“I guess she thought I wasn’t interested.”

:lol: That certainly backfired on him. I like how he immediately realised that he is the one to blame for not being told. I really thought he would react differently to Annie not telling him because isn't that always the case, someone tries to talk to someone else, they repeatedly don't want to listen and then get angry and throw out that "You should have told me" line when people stop bothering to tell them anything. Weird thing to focus this much attention on, I know. But I found his reaction amusing.

I'm glad that you are letting us in on whats going on in their heads. With Melody in previous chapters especially and now with Geoff. It helps make me care about the characters. I'm glad that Geoff is actually taking the time to think about what he wants to do, well atleast he was before that part at the end. But I guess you can't blame him for blurting it out like that considering whats happening.

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It was interesting to see just how easily Christine was able to slip back into her old ways of dealing with things. I could actually see that happenning if she were ever in a position like this. I'm glad it was a temporary slip though but at the same time I like that it worked to make Melody change her mind about leaving.

I liked all the talks between the characters here. Especially the ones between Annie and Kirsty, and Melody and Jai.

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