lino Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 great chapter again. i love this story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 great update as usual! xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lynd~ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 (edited) Aden and Melody maybe?If i can't have Meoff i guess they'll do! Update Soon. Edited July 30, 2009 by ~Lynd~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 That's going to be romantic... about time they spent some time together. I like how the dynamic has changed between Nicole and Melody... and her conversation with Aden. Great update, looking forward to the next one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I loved it!!! Loved Geoffs holiday!! It was so sweet! Liked Mel and Adens talk! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Geoff is very forgiving, but i am not complaining. Wonder how melody will be? thanks for the update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I'm glad she told the truth, and it was good that he forgave her.. after all you can sort of see where she was coming from - even if she did come up with a solution that was a bit odd. Unfortunately the little romantic encounter is going to have to be cut short now that Melody is in labour.. that's a shame it's always the H&A way to have someone supposed to be away for a week and the problems happen on the first day!.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 That was quite funny! Glad Nic told Geoff. Can't wait for the baby!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 great update!! cant wait till the baby comes.. big drama to come i think!! keep it coming x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 (edited) Lots of chapters to catch up with here. This review is for chapter 16 and the ones after. Good couple of chapters. Although the fic is starting to feel like one of those 40 minute long shows where you have a great 35 minute buildup to the issues, angst and whatever crisis that is going and the dynamic between all the characters involved and then everything falls into place and resolved just like that in the last five mintues. And it feels like we are in that last 5 minutes here. I like the direction you're going in, Melody and Nicole coming to an understanding. It's the only way for them to move forward. Nic and Geoff sorting everything out. I don't care about them but them being together means less reading about their relationship issues. But not really sure about the way in which to chose to have that happen. It just feels like you're on some fastrack to resolve everything now instead of just letting it happen in way that it comes off more naturally, whether a slower pace or slight changes to the scenes could have made the difference, I'm not sure. Anyways the writing is still good though. And Jai, Annie and Mel are still awesome together. BTW loved Annie's dig at Jai in the last chapter. Edited August 1, 2009 by Jody Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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