jdoddy Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Really like how you have given this story a cool turn - killing both Jai and Melody off in the space of about 5 lines - of course there is a chance that Jai has survived but I doubt that very much. I am left to wonder how Geoff will react when Nicole lets loose she might be pregnant - but if we take the scene from the actual show he should be quite supportive - I also like the way you have built the two relationships up - they both seem quite strong. Two really good chapters, Hope you post some more new stuff up soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Oh my god!They're dead?!And Geoff and Nicole have slept together and she might be pregnant and they've been stuck there for two months and I probably need to breathe now?!?! And Aden and Belle did something, sorry, zoned out during that part... Joking, okay?Joking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Melody and Jai!? Oh my god, poor people. Love how Aden and Belle stick together, they're sweet I hope Nicole tells Geoff about her being pregnant, he better take it okay haha, but somehow I doubt it with everything that's going on... Great Update :). Update sooon please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adelle2008 Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Haha LMAO at the moment because of your comments. Thanks heaps means alot reading your feedback! I will hopefully post another chapter tomorrow (Australian Time). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Geoff's a d*ckhead!!!! How selfish does he want to be. If i were Nicole, I would seriously never talk to him again haha. But that wouldn't make a good story would it? Aden is so cute. I'm glad he loves all that stuff Great Chapter, I loved it update soon pleaseeee? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Geoff's an ass! I hope Belle is gonna be ok! Aden he is so sweet Brill update once again, looking forward to more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Absolutely loved the way Nicole told Geoff.He'd better change his mind and grow up and help her deal with this. Getting a bit worried about Belle.See what happens. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 I also hope that Geoff realises that he has to stand by Nicole - but I can also see why he went a bit wierd - Nicole had known for two months and hadn't thought of telling him, hes just scared but will no doubt see the light at the end of the tunnel.. also is that Annie going all mad on us now? Good Chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Oooh, poor Nicole! Geoff better sort himself out soon. How could he do something like that? Although, I guess I can kinda of see the root of his reactions... Annie... aw! I actually thought that Jai hadn't drowned for the second, but no, you just made it into a dream Poor girl! Aden Need I say more? Update soon please? xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Oh gosh.I genuinely don't know what's going to happen to Belle here and I am really looking forward to finding out.Liked the bit where Aden assumed she was pregnant and went and told everyone and nice that the relationship between her and Geoff hasn't been forgotten. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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