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I have enjoyed reading your stories. The comment about the spacing is a worthwhile one. It would make reading easier for these tired old eyes. :lol:

I know you are a devoted Adelle fan but that does mean that your story is a bit predictable as we have a good idea how it's going to end. Like all couples on the show we as readers like to be wondering whether the obvious is really goi9ng to happen or are you going to surprise us? :rolleyes:

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Ooooh, very interesting! I love it! :D

It's so different and fresh, and I like how you've protrayed the character's and their thoughts at the beginning. Poor Geoff though, but I do like the idea of a jealous Geoff and [maybe] a showdown between him and Aden, which Aden wins of course. You know what, forget what I just said. :ph34r::lol:

Cannot wait for more!

xoxo

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