Choices (by Adelle2008) - comments

[SummerBayLocal]

Very good. I think you should continue! What does everyone else think?

[Red Ranger 1]

Ooh, I quite like this one.Keep going.

You're never going to let Geoff get Belle, are you..?Thought not.

[rokkafella125]

that was really good

an original idea

cant wait for more!

x

[Luc]

I like this, it's a bit different to other fics you've written before, and that's a good thing. It's creative. Can't wait for an update!

[Louise_2983]

I don't mean to seem mean because I tend to really enjoy your fics it's just I find them so difficult to read because of the complete lack of spacing. Is there any chance you could space it out a bit?

[SAM27#]

Great start!!! Can't wait to see what happens!!!

[LAURZY!]

Awww love it! so good

Bless Geoff, i feel so sorry for him cos i dont rec he has a chance!!

Cant wait to read more

[John]

I have enjoyed reading your stories. The comment about the spacing is a worthwhile one. It would make reading easier for these tired old eyes.

I know you are a devoted Adelle fan but that does mean that your story is a bit predictable as we have a good idea how it's going to end. Like all couples on the show we as readers like to be wondering whether the obvious is really goi9ng to happen or are you going to surprise us?

[Taniya_K]

Ooooh, very interesting! I love it!

It's so different and fresh, and I like how you've protrayed the character's and their thoughts at the beginning. Poor Geoff though, but I do like the idea of a jealous Geoff and [maybe] a showdown between him and Aden, which Aden wins of course. You know what, forget what I just said.

Cannot wait for more!

xoxo

[Adelle2008]

Thank you for all your comments. I will apply them in my story. Yes I will space out more! Thanks for letting me know and I will try and apply surpises in the story, so you are left guessing. Hopefully my story wont be so predictable.