matticus01 Posted July 26, 2009 Report Posted July 26, 2009 and that was absolutely beautiful Written perfectly Very well done Quote
~Zoe~ Posted July 26, 2009 Report Posted July 26, 2009 That was beautiful, you wrote that really well Quote
Symphony Posted July 26, 2009 Report Posted July 26, 2009 Today, we are here to show our friends and family just how much we love each other. I don’t want a wedding, I want a marriage. I want a lifetime. All he had left was memories. Those two lines were two of the singularlary most beautiful and moving lines that I've read in a fan fiction yet, I think. Gorgeous story over all; I enjoyed how you broke it all donwn, but that ending was the real punch. Excellent writing! Quote
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