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:o Whoa, that was a great, and eventful, chapter!!

I can't believe that he's found them again. :( But I'm glad that they're not going to leave town again. I hope they fight, and win, this time.

Racy fluff :ph34r: about says it all. You always write the intimate scenes so well. I don't think anyone does it better than you, with all the descriptions and lack of dialogue; you can almost feel their emotions.

That ending! :o Who left that note, and who's at Beth's door? Scary that someone knew about Belle [it was Belle right?] losing her virginity the night before. Does that mean they're watching them constantly? :unsure:

Cannot wait for more!!

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Woah.If that's the guy that's after them, then he seems to be a complete weirdo.Loved Mattie and Beth's reunion, hoping it's not going to be short lived...Also a bit confused as to whether that was Belle or Mattie that found the note, was I meant to be?Looking forward to more.

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Aw......! After everything in that chapter, that ending! :wub:

Ok, wow. Another FANTASTIC chapter!! Where do I start?!

I can't believe that the murderer is Belle's ex! Or that he killed her sister :( Or cheated on her, for that matter. I'm assuming, from the clues that you've left and the name, that this David dude is

Cassie's uncle?

. Will we find out why he killed her sister? :unsure:

Cassie! :o She was so brave to go back, but I can't believe she went on her own. Or that her father attacked her again.

Beth, too! I hope she's alright. Was it David who attacked her too?

The little bits of Aden and Belle, and Ric and Mattie were so cute. I love the little snippets that you include into the storyline. It makes it too sweet! ^_^

Definately cannot wait for more, once again.

xoxo

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Aw......! After everything in that chapter, that ending! :wub:

Ok, wow. Another FANTASTIC chapter!! Where do I start?!

I can't believe that the murderer is Belle's ex! Or that he killed her sister :( Or cheated on her, for that matter. I'm assuming, from the clues that you've left and the name, that this David dude is

Cassie's uncle?

. Will we find out why he killed her sister? :unsure:

Cassie! :o She was so brave to go back, but I can't believe she went on her own. Or that her father attacked her again.

Beth, too! I hope she's alright. Was it David who attacked her too?

The little bits of Aden and Belle, and Ric and Mattie were so cute. I love the little snippets that you include into the storyline. It makes it too sweet! ^_^

Definately cannot wait for more, once again.

xoxo

Thanks so much Taniya, there wont be another update as Im heading to bed, I'm so tired, and I have the flu! ! !

But I can tell you, David is in relation to Cassie, but you wont find out how until another couple of chapters

And I'm glad you like the snippets

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