~Zoe~ Posted May 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2009 Got round to reading this fiction again, missed three chapters, and they were all great Bec.. this is a good fiction. I liked the interaction with Cassie and her dad, he was a bit scary to her & those two men in the park seemed scary Looking forward to reading more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Awww, loved that ending.Glad Ric told her that he knows and that she accepted him in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Eeeeeeeeeek! Go Ric! :D Glad that he's made the first move. Hopefully Mattie will give him a chance [even if it would be for his own good if she didn't...] Poor Belle Getting choked to death by sand must suck. As well has having a hot guy like Aden have a crush on you, and vice versa, but not being able to do anyhting about it Can't wait for more!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted May 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Go Ric - I'm glad he made the first move with Matilda Another good chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Looptroop Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 (edited) Another good chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Edited May 6, 2009 by Looptroop Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Awwww yay for Ric!!! I feel so sorry for both girls cos they cant have the one thing they want really Cant wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 I really like this fic Bec, its sooo interesting! Love the idea of wintess protection You're comin up with some clever ideas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Absolutely LOVED the Aden and Belle scene Ric and Mattie were so sweet too.... I hope she doesn't regret it! Cant wait to see what happens next!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Another amazing chapter. Loved the scene between Aden and Belle. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Absolutely loved that scene between Ric and Mattie.Really hope she doesn't regret it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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