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:o You're kidding me right?! You can't end it there! Well, you obviously can, cos you did, but... :o

Another great chapter. Loved the flashbacks to see what had happened, and the dramatic hospital scenes.

I really dunno who's dead! I don't want it to be Belle, but I'm getting scared that it is! :unsure:

Cannot wait for more!

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That was a great chapter

You wrote the emotions about Matilda really well when Rachel was telling her about her mum.

& I'm glad the Lucas is okay, hope Belle wakes up from her coma soon

Good update

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