~Zoe~ Posted May 1, 2009 Report Posted May 1, 2009 Great first chapter, I like the sound of this fiction Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 1, 2009 Report Posted May 1, 2009 Wow, fantastic start! But I loved that beginning bit. It was like something out of a movie. A really good one! Can't wait for more! I hope the dude doesnt catch up with them again!! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 1, 2009 Report Posted May 1, 2009 Wow, good stuff.Glad you've started this one.Looking forward to more. Quote
Lise Posted May 1, 2009 Report Posted May 1, 2009 That was good, Bec. Kinda scary but good! I can't wait to read more. It sounds really good. Quote
Inactive User Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 Wow this is really good. Scary and dramatic! Update soon plz Quote
**Julie** Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 Wow! Brilliant start. I can't wait to read more. Quote
SAM27# Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 You have me hooked already!!!!! Fantastic start! Can't wait for more! Quote
Lise Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 That was a good chapter. I like the stuff with Cassie and the boys. I like Ric and Aden's first reaction's to seeing Matilda and Belle. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 Good update.Liked Aden and Ric's reaction to seeing the girls and Mattie's to seeing Ric.Wondering if Cassie's dad knowing about witness protection is going to be significant.See Cassie's as high maintenance as ever... Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 Hmm, really intrigued by who that guy is.Love how Ric and Mattie are around each other. Quote
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