tessalove Posted April 15, 2009 Report Posted April 15, 2009 em......is anyone interested in this?? im not sure whether to update or not if you would like me to update can you please reply or pm me thanx x Quote
Symphony Posted April 15, 2009 Report Posted April 15, 2009 I like the way you wrote in 'chatspeak' to show the colloquial type language - that was nicely done. I don't get online much at the moment, but I'd certainly be interested in seeing you write more! Quote
tessalove Posted April 15, 2009 Author Report Posted April 15, 2009 I like the way you wrote in 'chatspeak' to show the colloquial type language - that was nicely done. I don't get online much at the moment, but I'd certainly be interested in seeing you write more! thank you! ok, well it means alot that your goin to read more as soon as i can i will update X Quote
jdoddy Posted April 15, 2009 Report Posted April 15, 2009 I've only really been coming on to reply to spoiler threads I'm subscribed to and to read new fiction chapters so I missed. This one - quite liking the first chapter though. Quote
jdoddy Posted April 15, 2009 Report Posted April 15, 2009 (edited) hHA - Aden Bunny - that line was genius! - come to think of it the whole disease joke made me laugh! Edited April 15, 2009 by jdoddy Quote
Symphony Posted April 17, 2009 Report Posted April 17, 2009 Okay, well obviously this is the beach, its usually pretty popular with the locals, and if you come on a good day, you may see me surfing topless!" "Oh wow well can you give me your shedule?" "Oh, yeah totally il mail it to you!" aden laughed that bit was awesome, so Aden - and the part where Geoff teased him about the disease ;) Nice job - you've done loads of writing, I really enjoyed reading all that even though I hate thinking of Aden with anyone except Belle Quote
tessalove Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Posted April 17, 2009 ^^^thank you very much i dont really like belle which i swhy i guess i started this fic, i want to apologise to all the adelle lovers lol is is only fiction anyway hehe xX Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 18, 2009 Report Posted April 18, 2009 (edited) Just read all of this, good stuff.I'm just glad to see someone doing something different with Aden.(Or should that be someone different doing...no, let's not go there.)Loved Geoff winding up Aden with the disease and their type of relationship.Looking forward to more. (Although going by that last chapter, you should probably change your spoiler warning to "Yes".) Edited April 18, 2009 by Red Ranger 1 Quote
amz89 Posted April 18, 2009 Report Posted April 18, 2009 um I commented on this this morning musten worked lol, i love this fic more soon please Quote
tessalove Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Posted April 18, 2009 (Although going by that last chapter, you should probably change your spoiler warning to "Yes".) oh sorry, i wasnt planning on using spoilers il change it now! thank you^^^ xX Quote
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