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I like the way you wrote in 'chatspeak' to show the colloquial type language - that was nicely done.

I don't get online much at the moment, but I'd certainly be interested in seeing you write more! :)

thank you!

ok, well it means alot that your goin to read more as soon as i can i will update


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Okay, well obviously this is the beach, its usually pretty popular with the locals, and if you come on a good day, you may see me surfing topless!"

"Oh wow well can you give me your shedule?"

"Oh, yeah totally il mail it to you!" aden laughed

that bit was awesome, so Aden - and the part where Geoff teased him about the disease ;)

Nice job - you've done loads of writing, I really enjoyed reading all that even though I hate thinking of Aden with anyone except Belle :(

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Just read all of this, good stuff.I'm just glad to see someone doing something different with Aden.(Or should that be someone different doing...no, let's not go there.)Loved Geoff winding up Aden with the disease and their type of relationship.Looking forward to more.

(Although going by that last chapter, you should probably change your spoiler warning to "Yes".)

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