HAA Girl 08 Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Whoa, that was reeeeeeeeeeeeeally good! Amazing, actually. The letter was so but brilliantly written. Looking forward to more of your fics! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Brilliantly written, whispered_envy. I really like the idea of Aden finding something from his mother, and the way you wrote is was just beautiful, really capturing the emotions of all she and now Aden must be feeling . I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 i liked that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Awwww !! So sweet, loved it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 That was really good! It was sad! But it was still good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whispered_envy Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 (edited) Thanks everyone! Really appreciate your kind comments Edited June 22, 2009 by whispered_envy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 That was really good. The letter was really sad but the timing was good. Beautifully written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 I enjoyed this I love the idea of children finding letters from their parents, addressed to them for after they're gone or whatnot; it has a really lovely yet sad tinge to it in theory. Great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 (edited) That was so well written. What got to me the most was, the way his mother spoke about how his father was when she met him and how she felt about him, that could so easily be Belle writing about Aden. Edited June 23, 2009 by Jody Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whispered_envy Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 ^ That's what I was kind of hinting at, so I'm glad you got it! Again, I express my thanks to everyone's comments! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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