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Brilliantly written, whispered_envy. I really like the idea of Aden finding something from his mother, and the way you wrote is was just beautiful, really capturing the emotions of all she and now Aden must be feeling :).

I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

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That was so well written. What got to me the most was, the way his mother spoke about how his father was when she met him and how she felt about him, that could so easily be Belle writing about Aden.

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