She Left With My Heart (by LauraPhilly!!) - comments

[hitmanfan]

oh that was so but very well written.

[~Zoe~]

That was sad, you wrote it really well though

[MrsL]

I am crying like a baby. So emotional. Very well written

[HAA Girl 08]

Soooo sad! Poor Aden, Lydia and Robbie .

Very well written, though!

[sephy]

Wow. That was just... Wow. Absolutely brilliant! Having to tell a child, or in Aden's case, two children, that their mother's passed on must be the hardest thing in the world, and you did it amazingly. I could feel almost every single pain and emotion in the fic. I have to say that this is probably the saddest and greatest scene/fic I've read with one half of Adelle dying. Well done!

[amz89]

well written very sad though.

[LauraPhilly!!]

Wow. That was just... Wow. Absolutely brilliant! Having to tell a child, or in Aden's case, two children, that their mother's passed on must be the hardest thing in the world, and you did it amazingly. I could feel almost every single pain and emotion in the fic. I have to say that this is probably the saddest and greatest scene/fic I've read with one half of Adelle dying. Well done!

Thank you so much!!

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