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Great ending, Eli. Joey does seem to have a "wise above her years" sort of air about her, and I think you got that spot on in the way she reacted to Hugo and Angelo. The final scene was very sweet, and it's nice to see Charlie and Joey get their "family ever after" (or at least until the next thing comes along :P). This story was well writtern, and I thoroughyl enjoyed reading it :).

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The fic is over. :( But it was a great ending.

I'm glad nobody got killed. :) Peter and Charlie saved the day. They make a great team. It would be nice to see them work together on the show. :)

I know you're not a fan of this fic but it was a great and very well written fic, Eli! :D

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Only just found this fic, and I have to say it is really good and that I cant believe you dont like it. After watching an old episode of the holdens arriving and the back story of why they came to summerbay the other day it got me thinking about just how much of a similar situation Angelo is in to Jacks and it made me realise that Angelo should be forgiven alot easier than what he has been, but you managed to pick up on this alot earlier to me.

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