Symphony Posted May 18, 2009 Report Posted May 18, 2009 I think Leah has hit the nail on the head?! Louise, oh my god what are you trying to do to me with the whole Liam & Nicole; and Geoff just arriving home At least, I'm assuming that the blonde is Nicole, and you're not trying to pan Annie off as a blonde I love the way you're writing him into it; because so many of us are 'fangirls' for the H&A stars, it's kinda cool to read of them being fangirls .. if you get me! Next chapter soon please
Louise_2983 Posted May 18, 2009 Report Posted May 18, 2009 Symphony said: I think Leah has hit the nail on the head?! Louise, oh my god what are you trying to do to me with the whole Liam & Nicole; and Geoff just arriving home At least, I'm assuming that the blonde is Nicole, and you're not trying to pan Annie off as a blonde Oh my god, that is not Annie in that bed I assure you! I would never go there! And I think if it had of been Belle would have killed him with her bare hands
Symphony Posted May 18, 2009 Report Posted May 18, 2009 Louise_2983 said: Symphony said: I think Leah has hit the nail on the head?! Louise, oh my god what are you trying to do to me with the whole Liam & Nicole; and Geoff just arriving home At least, I'm assuming that the blonde is Nicole, and you're not trying to pan Annie off as a blonde Oh my god, that is not Annie in that bed I assure you! I would never go there! And I think if it had of been Belle would have killed him with her bare hands oh yeah, good point, i didn't think of that!
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 18, 2009 Report Posted May 18, 2009 Sorry, I've just been laughing at the comments need a moment to remember what happened in the actual chapter. Loved the opening conversation between Nicole and Liam, where they'd ended up by the end of the chapter...was not something I was expecting.Liked Belle meeting her dad, it's an interesting direction to take it in.(I didn't get that he was a drug baron, that'll be interesting too.)Nice conversation between Nicole and Natalie as well.And might be an idea for Belle to keep Geoff away from the bedroom.Don't want them to both be scarred for life.
jdoddy Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Just when it looks like its all looking up for me as a devoted Niff shipper - you throw this massive spanner in the works (or a whole toolkit if you like) its a good spanner though.. Looking forward to an update
KaiyaBlake Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Oh my, what's Nicole gotten herself into Assuming it's Nicole.. Poor Geoff, everything he has to deal with! I don't like Belle's dad, he's too brutally honest for me But I think you wrote him perfectly. Loved it. Can't wait for more
~Zoe~ Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 I liked the chat with Nicole and Liam, but them at the end If it is Nicole.. Did'nt really like Belle's dad, thats like my dad in a way as he don't want nothing to do with me either Great chapter, cant wait for more
-g-l-a-m-o-r-ous- Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Great update! I assume it is Nicole with Liam, which I was not expecting Can't wait for your next update!
tessalove Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Oh my gosh!!! great update!!! I really hope the blonde isnt nicole!!! Omg poor belle hope geoff beleives her!!! Hopefully another update soon!!! eX
jdoddy Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 I'm sorry to seem like the nerd in this outfit - but the chapter said 'familiar blonde' and the only blonde in the Fic is Nicole so it doesn't take much to realise that Liam Murphy was getting it on with the Bay's newest teen mum... Lucky Him
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