Red Ranger 1 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Posted May 16, 2009 Great chapter.I love the way you show both their points of view and I think that in their own way both of them are absolutely right.Looking forward to the next update.
Louise_2983 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Posted May 16, 2009 Red Ranger 1 said: I think that in their own way both of them are absolutely right. I think so too which is quite difficult when you have to decide which direction the story is going to go in next... Thanks for the ego boosting comments everyone!
jdoddy Posted May 16, 2009 Report Posted May 16, 2009 Hopefully she might decide that loving Geoff and Angelica is enough. (in an ideal world) - but I trust you to write more good stuff..
Louise_2983 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Posted May 16, 2009 jdoddy said: Hopefully she might decide that loving Geoff and Angelica is enough. (in an ideal world) - but I trust you to write more good stuff.. But like she already said, they don't live in an ideal world... I can't promise a happy ending at the moment but I realise every Geoff and Nicole fan I've acquired as readers might actually kill me if it's not!
Louise_2983 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Posted May 16, 2009 Sneak peak: Quote “You’ve got to stop encouraging him Nic” “To do what? Pass the HSC? I didn’t realise that was a bad thing” “You know he still has feelings for you, he still thinks you’re going to be a happy little family one day and if you’re still sticking to your guns and insisting that won’t be the case then you have to stay away from him. Stop dangling yourself in front of him like some sort of prize he can win if he puts in enough effort!” “I don’t do that!” “Maybe not intentionally but secretly you love it” Aden told her knowingly as he flung open the fridge door and grabbed a beer, the transparent, emerald bottle clinking against those either side of it as he removed it from the shelf and popped off the lid with a bottle opener. “You love the chase. You love him pleading with you, telling you how much he wants you to be together” “That’s not true!” she protested adamantly but his words struck a chord with her she wouldn’t admit. “I don’t know what it is” he shrugged walking through into the lounge and flopping down onto the sofa as she followed. “Maybe it’s because Roman wasn’t around and you never felt like your Mum wanted you” “She didn’t” she whispered quietly sitting down next to him and hugging her knees close to her chest. She didn’t need reminding of how much of an inconvenience she had been to her own mother. “And because of that you’re a tease. You want Geoff to want you even if you don’t want him and if he tells you about it, pleads with you even , then even better hey?”
jdoddy Posted May 16, 2009 Report Posted May 16, 2009 Me.. a Geoff and Nicole shipper?... never! Can't wait for the next chapter, the heart to heart between Aden and Nicole looks good- unfortunately he is making alot more sense than I would like
KaiyaBlake Posted May 16, 2009 Report Posted May 16, 2009 I can see where they're are both coming from, but I really wish Nicole would change her mind Love the sneak peak, Aden's kinda right Loved it. Can't wait for more
~Zoe~ Posted May 16, 2009 Report Posted May 16, 2009 The sneak peak was great, looking forward to the full chapter
tessalove Posted May 17, 2009 Report Posted May 17, 2009 Great sneak peek!! Its cool that you do sneak peeks, keeps us less impatient, or more lol cant wait until the full update!!! eX
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