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rokkafella125

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im glad that Aden knows about Sydney and Angelo...

i liked the bit at the end:

“Because I love you and because I was pregnant with your child Aden. It will always be me and you. But for now we need to take things slowly. Can’t we just be friends for now?”

“Belle.....”

“Please Aden. It’s the right thing to do”

“Okay....you’re right, you’re always right” he smiled at her; brushing her hair back behind her ear it sent shivers down Belle’s neck.

“Friends?”

“Friends” he smiled, Belle held out her hand and Aden gave it a friendly shake, both laughing they gazed at their daughter smiling.

it was just so aww,

and thy still love each other... even more aww :wub:

i think the way Roman handled things with Sydney was great

cant wait for more!

x

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I very rarely comment on message boards, but I am loving this story!

You make it really easy to actually imagine what is happening and the characters are so realistic.

I can't wait for more, however, am a bit worried about Sydney, especially as you have mentioned her diabetes.

Looking forward to more updates!!

Thank you

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