KaiyaBlake Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Wow So sad though! Love how you wrote it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 WOW!!!!! That was absolutely incredible, i actually had a single tear roll down my cheek once i finished reading that. “You had your life to lose Belle and that’s something you had a long time before I ever came along” That's the line that made me start tearing up. It was so amazing, this scene should so be in the show! I actually don't think they could do it better or even as well as you've just dealt with it. Everything the characters said made complete sense. I loved that Aden was determined not to apologise but they were both obviously really hurting. Brilliant! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Wow! That was great! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradyell Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 That was absolutely brilliant louise! we can only hope that the actual writers do as good a job as that! i'm gussing not though!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 WOW!!!!! That was absolutely incredible, i actually had a single tear roll down my cheek once i finished reading that. “You had your life to lose Belle and that’s something you had a long time before I ever came along” That's the line that made me start tearing up. It was so amazing, this scene should so be in the show! I actually don't think they could do it better or even as well as you've just dealt with it. Everything the characters said made complete sense. I loved that Aden was determined not to apologise but they were both obviously really hurting. Brilliant! :D Aww thanks Jen. I wasn't expecting anyone to cry lol! It means a lot that it had such an effect on you Thanks for the lovely comments everyone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emma_2006 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Wow, I loved this one shot Louise, it was just WOW Brilliantly written! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Woah I only posted this two days ago, surely it could have stayed in the main forum a little longer? Some people might not have had a chance to read it yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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