Jump to content

Why Don't You Have Really Short Hair And A Pierced Nose? (by Traceve) - comments


Lauz
 Share

Recommended Posts

That was really well written! You really had me on the edge of my seat in a way, even if that sounds weird for a fic like this. But the tension you managed to build up between them... Amazing, and totally realistic! Looking forward to reading more from you :)

Link to comment
Share on other sites

That was really great. Woo! Adam Goodes is my hero. You had me hooked at the opening line when I saw the word footy :P. I really liked the context of the whole piece. It seemed a lot more natural and easier for them to be themselves outside the bay. You wrote both characters well, and everything seemed very "in character".

I liked that Charlie was mentally kicking herself and feeling uncomfortable with people just assuming they were a couple.

Great job and thanks for letting Sydney win! :P

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • 2 weeks later...
  • QUIET ACHIEVER changed the title to Why Don't You Have Really Short Hair And A Pierced Nose? (by Traceve) - comments

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

 Share

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue.