Why Don't You Have Really Short Hair And A Pierced Nose? (by Traceve) - comments

[Lauz]

Shannon that was awesome!!! I love the comedy you threw into it. And also, it's got the best title

I'm gonna read it again haha.

[Danni02]

That was awesome

[Eli]

That was really well written! You really had me on the edge of my seat in a way, even if that sounds weird for a fic like this. But the tension you managed to build up between them... Amazing, and totally realistic! Looking forward to reading more from you

[Inactive User]

Wow this is so awesome! Loved it

[H&A_diehard]

That was absolute quality.

[Jen]

That was really great. Woo! Adam Goodes is my hero. You had me hooked at the opening line when I saw the word footy . I really liked the context of the whole piece. It seemed a lot more natural and easier for them to be themselves outside the bay. You wrote both characters well, and everything seemed very "in character".

I liked that Charlie was mentally kicking herself and feeling uncomfortable with people just assuming they were a couple.

Great job and thanks for letting Sydney win!

[Julez]

I really enjoyed that - some insight into how Charlie may have come to realise that she's attracted to Joey. I like how other people noticed it before she did - reminds me that Ruby has been seeing the signs for awhile now.

[lozlovesh&a]

Awesome! Yay for Jarlie and Yay for Sydney Swans. LOL. So fantastic