Inactive User Posted March 10, 2009 Report Posted March 10, 2009 Oh awwww loved the sneak peek! Can't wait for the next update Quote
Taniya_K Posted March 11, 2009 Report Posted March 11, 2009 Aw, yay! Belle went home. Love Lizzie. She's too adorable! I wonder what those men are going to do to Belle now I hope she'll be ok! Can't wait for more! xoxo Quote
Inactive User Posted March 11, 2009 Report Posted March 11, 2009 Great chapter. Yah Belle at home Awww Lizzie Can we have a picture of her? Noo don't let the men hurt her! Belle better hurry up and remember what happened before it's late! Update soon Quote
LAURZY! Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Posted March 11, 2009 Lizzie is just so very cute kid! So glad she's home!!! Dont like what those people had to say about her though Brilliant!!! cannot wait for more Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 12, 2009 Report Posted March 12, 2009 It's good that Belle's home but it looks as though her troubles are far from over...Looking forward to more. Quote
Taniya_K Posted March 14, 2009 Report Posted March 14, 2009 Not Lizzie! OMG, that poor little girl. And poor Aden. And Belle, of course! I thought they were planning on hurting Belle again Please update soon! xoxo Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 14, 2009 Report Posted March 14, 2009 Oh my god!I did not see that ending coming at all.Really great twist.I loved the start, when Belle was willing to risk putting herself in pain to comfort Lizzie.Can't wait to read what happens next. Quote
Inactive User Posted March 14, 2009 Report Posted March 14, 2009 Whoa what a twist! Poor Lizzie! Poor Aden! Hope the men better not hurt her! Update soon please!!! This is getting really good!!! *jumps up and down in her seat* Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted March 15, 2009 Report Posted March 15, 2009 Thanks for all the comments!! Here's a quick sneak peek!!: Quote Lizzie shuddered as the tall man slammed the door shut. She looked around the dark room. She couldn't see anything, it was as dark and as empty as the night sky. She curled up into a ball, pulling her knees close up to her chest. "Mummy?" she called out into the darkness. "Daddy?" Tears fell silently from her face, as she waited for someone to answer. She closed her eyes tight and buried her face in her lap when none came. "Mummy...Daddy!" she cried out. "I'm scared!" She burst into tears as the image of her parents rose to the surface of her mind. They were smiling, looking as happy as ever. She shivered as a cold gust of wind blew in from the broken glass window. She wrapped her arms tightly around her jacket, pulling her sleeves over her ice cold fingers. She gasped as a thought suddenly came to her. She put her hands up over her eyes, hiding them from the darkness. She let her mind fill itself with the image of her parents, smiling down at her. "No one can hurt me now," she murmered though her hands. "I am in my hiding place." Quote
Inactive User Posted March 16, 2009 Report Posted March 16, 2009 Loved the sneek peek. How old would she be in this chapter? Probably 3 years old? Can't wait to write more soon Quote
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