The House Where They Lived (by meant2live) - comments

[rokkafella125]

firstly

wow that was so good

secondly

it was such a brilliant idea

thirdly

you made me cry

it was excellent!

ilovedit!

well done

x

[Taniya_K]

Awwwwww. That was such a great oneshot. I was the right mix of sweetness and sadness so that it wasn't too depressing.

I would love to have a follow up to this [maybe?] just to see what happens, but I can't wait to read your other idea!

xoxo

[LAURZY!]

Awww that was great it made me cry!!

Really loved it, such a great idea

[Jody]

This one-shot was amazing. I don't think anyone has written them like this before. It started of so angsty yet ended up being quite sweet in the end.

I really loved it. And after reading this one I can't wait to read your other one.

[homeandawayforever23]

That was amazing. Very well written.

I really liked the idea.

I can't wait to read your other one.

[Louise_2983]

That was amazing! I'm in tears! Thank you, it was a fantastic present!

"I missed you.” Aden whispered into Darren’s brown hair. “I love you so much, you and Hannah... and mummy.” Aden looked up at Belle over his sons head."

That bit made my stomach flip never mind Belle's!

[Zetti]

Aww a great one shot! So much intensity and feelings in it it was great

[rfran]

That was so beautifully written and so emotional.

Loved the conflict within Belle, her wanting to hate Aden for leaving but being uncontrollably drawn to him.

Edited December 22, 2008 by rfran

[Inactive User]

So beautiful and well-written, touching and emticonal! Great one-shot.

[meant2live]

Thank you everyone, I'm glad you all liked it so much.

And Lousie your other one will be up soon, not had much time on the computer since christmas, been too busy partying.