Ruby Was A Pretty Girl With A Dull Personality (by Traceve) - comments

[Inactive User]

Awesome fanfiction. Cant wait to read next chapter.

[Symphony]

it's a one shot

Interesting. I hope you don't mind me saying this, but I felt that more description could have gone a long way, so that, it wouldn't be just people who watch H&A that could read it and understand, but more - if we knew / could see more of what they were wearing, their expressions, their appearances, etc, then even those who don't know H&A could read as a simple story - if you get me?

But ... interesting where you took this ... not something i was expecting

Nice job

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh, that was great.I so wish I'd got in first...Really funny, loved that ending and I could just picture it.

[~Zoe~]

That was a good one shot, I liked that

[Inactive User]

Awwwww wish its more than a oneshot. But it's a great oneshot :-)

[Traceve]

Interesting. I hope you don't mind me saying this, but I felt that more description could have gone a long way, so that, it wouldn't be just people who watch H&A that could read it and understand, but more - if we knew / could see more of what they were wearing, their expressions, their appearances, etc, then even those who don't know H&A could read as a simple story - if you get me?

I don't mind at all, I welcome constructive criticism, it's how writers like myself and others improve! I've been thinking bout what you've said since you posted it and it does make sense. I could have been a lot more descriptive. It's too late now though, but I'll definitely keep it in mind next time I write another fic

Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed it

[.Amy.]

Well done, what an unusual pairing but it worked, I am disapointed it's only a one-shot though.

[xGlowingAngelx]

I like the end line

That was a great read, Shan. In my many years of reading slash stories, I rarely venture into femmeslash, but I gave this a shot because A) The pairing was rather interesting (Despite being a Geoff/Nic shipper, I like to venture away from expected pairings every now and then!) and B) I read an LA fic you did once and remembered how good you were at writing femmeslash. I enjoyed it, anyway. It was quite cute and fluffy, which is always good in one shots. The dancing was really sweet

The writing was super.

[Laura]

This is really good Shannon

[Traceve]

Wow, thanks! That LA fic... that's going back a bit . I initially was a bit wary of the pairing because when you see the names Ruby/Nicole together it does look a tad random.

I'm glad everyone enjoyed it though! I'll probably write another Ruby/Nicole one-shot shortly. I just need to find some more prompts because I always get stuck for ideas.