Hello Stranger (by Lise) - comments

[Lise]

Thank you for the comments.

I did think about that Shan but the track I took it down just seemed better. That might be an idea for another fic, you never know.

I may have an idea for the sequel. Maybe.

[HAA Girl 08]

Love it! Great to see them in the future!

Love the bit, "Hello stranger!"

Well done

[Jen]

Drelle lives!

Ok, maybe not quite but I saw the subtitle and instantly knew that I had to read it. I like how you described how both their lives turned out, and you can definitely see the maturation of both the characters.

Great work, and I'd vote for a sequel .

[Stephanie]

That is brilliant, really well written. I was so worried they that something romantic was going to happen between them and I'm so glad it didn't.

It was good to see that they had matured, and had a good chemistry as friends. If that makes sense? I hope it does. I especially loved the opening when Drew didn't recognise Belle.

I love your choices of names for the kids by the way!

I loved it.

Edited April 3, 2009 by drama_girl

[Lise]

Thanks!

Yes, that does make sense, Steph. The names of Belle's kids do have some meaning - they the names I would call my kids (if I ever have any).

I would give you an update on any sequel but I did have a go at it and didn't really get anywhere so I might have to have a go over Easter? After I have another look at my script for the competition since that has a deadline.